7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在——青夏教育精英家教网——

7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Compared with traditional ones，self-organized tours are rapidly gaining a popularity among the youth．
During a self-organized tour，arrangements of sightseeing can be flexible and changeable depend on our own interests．Thus，we can spend the time free and head for our favorite destinations directly，only in which way are we fully expose us to the local cultures and customs．
Besides，self-arranged tours can bring about great inconvenience in the arrangements of transportation and accommodation．At the same time，the discounts which a group of tourist can often enjoy in restaurants and hotels may not be available．Also，lack of safety makes easy to get hurt．
In my opinion，the advantages of a self-organized tour seems to outweigh its disadvantages．How a wise choice it is to go on a self-organized tour，that helps us enjoy ourselves to the fullest．

6．There is a wonderful story about Jimmy Durante，one of great singers．When （61）asked（ask）to be a part of a show for some old World WarⅡsoldiers，he told them he was very busy and he could afford only a few minutes，（62）but he would come if they wouldn't mind his singing one short song and immediately leaving for his next appointment．Of course，the show's director agreed （63）happily （happy）．
But when Jimmy got on stage，something surprising happened．He went through a short song and then stayed．The applause grew louder and louder and he kept （64）staying （stay）．Pretty soon，he had been on stage （65）forfifteen，twenty，and then thirty minutes．One of his（66）assistants（assist） behind the stage stopped him and said，"I thought you had to go after a few minutes．What happened？"
Jimmy answered，"I did have to go，but I can show you（67）the reason why I stayed．You can see for （68）yourself （you） if you look at the front row．"In the front row were two men，both of （69）whom had lost an arm in the war．One had lost his right arm and the other had lost his left．Together，they were able to clap，and that was exactly what they（70）were doing （do），loudly and cheerfully．

5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones．So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of．This change in communication have good effects on our works and life．Comparing with letters and public phones，mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient．If you missed your grandmother，you just take out your phone and say"hello"to him．And she will be happy to hear your voice．If you want to place order with a foreign company，you can e-mail the message．It'll be minutes after you get their reply．

4．As we all know，games play a very important role in the growth of children．Children should grow along with playing games； for，（61）through playing games，they can not only acquire knowledge，but also develop their abilities to get along with others．
However，most children are （62）faced （face） with a completely different situation．Most parents fear that games will prevent children from increasing new knowledge and （63）that the children will fail in the future examinations．So，instead of （64）letting （let） the children themselves find and learn naturally from their surroundings，they force their children to take part in（65）various （variety） kinds of classes，learning English，playing（66）the piano or practicing drawing，etc．What's more，some parents put away the children's toys which are very useful in developing children's （67）imagination （imagine） and practical abilities．
Here is a piece of good advice to those parents：（68）if/when you want to expect your child to be able to accomplish something，you must first of all develop his ability to adapt （69）to the new surroundings．That cram （填鸭式的） education can lead to nothing （70）but a failure in the children's growth．

3．After the MH17incident，the UN Security Council adopted a resolution and ______ a thorough and independent international investigation．（　　）

2．With the losses ______，the chances for the team to make the post season are slipping away，which disappoints its fans．（　　）

1．Several years ago，I was backpacking in the Philippines （41）when I met a lady from the US．She was paying a visit to her father，（42）who had lived with her in the US．I asked why her father （43）had chosen （choose） to live on such a poor and （44）lonely（lone） island．She said her father was diagnosed with cancer after he moved to the US and the doctor said he had only half a year （45）left（leave）．As soon as her father heard the news，he went back to live on their home island in the Philippines．（46）What happened next was （47）a miracle．Fishing and barbecuing as he used to，her father survived．（48）It turned out that happiness was the best cure，"the woman said．
Backpacking tours like this give me the chance （49）to reflect（reflect ） on the true purpose of living．Traveling has changed me．But if you asked me what that change is （50）about，I would say it is about finding what I really want：happiness．

20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A survey basing on 1，000students found that half of the pupils and 80% of the middle school students sleeps less than nine hours every night．Too many homework given by school teachers and parents is the main reasons．Another reason lies in students'bad habits．Some students，for example，are absent-minded while doing his homework，and some waste their after-class time．The third reason is because some students have to get up early on weekdays to get school far away from home．Experts are calling at schools and parents to cut down on the amount of homework but students should make a good use of their time．It would be better if they could choose to study in a nearby school．

19．I was traveling in a small place in New York．That place had no taxi for a short （61）distance （distant）．One had to take a rickshaw（人力车）．
I called out for an old man in the waiting line．Before I got on the rickshaw，I （62）automatically（automatic） asked how much he would charge to take me across to the Mall．I（63）was told （tell）"10dollars"．Then I started bargaining．He just gave a hard smile and said，"Whatever you feel like，please give me．It is not necessary（64）to bargain（bargain） on this small amount．"
I was a bit ashamed at myself and kept quiet while he continued，"（65）Unlike（like） those taxis，my vehicle does not run on petrol or diesel（柴油） or even gas；（66）itruns on my sweat．So please give it to me （67）with a smile，for the money has to feed so many （68）hungry（hunger） mouths at home．"
When we reached the Mall，I gave him the money and the smile （69）as requested and added a gentle pat on his back．He smiled back as if to give me a receipt and I would preserve his smile for（70）a long time．

18．-I'm surprised to hear that Sue and Paul have _____________．
-So am I．They seemed very happy together when I last saw them．（　　）

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