Question

请根据上面两幅图写一篇短文，写作时要注意以下几点：
1. 第一段把漫画中的内容描述清楚；
2. 第二段写你自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点；适当地发挥，使语言连贯。
词数：120左右
参考词汇：扶起瓶子straighten the bottle up

 
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

Do you understand this cartoon? Let me tell you. One day, the son wanted to help a little girl stand up when she fell over, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked at seeing her son just let the fallen oil bottle lie. She asked him why he didn’t put it in place, but the boy talked back, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”
I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds as well. They should let their children know it’s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in a society which is a big family for all of us. Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?

解析试题分析: 图表作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】文中出现一些常见的短语stand up站着；knock sth down撞倒。。；was shocked at对。。感到震惊；disagree with不同意某人的意见；set a good example to给。。树立榜样；If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it这个句子体现对过去的虚拟。They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds as well.这个句子提到not only but also连接并列的谓语动词，时态保持一致；We live in a society which is a big family for all of us这个句子中which引导society的定语从句；
考点：看图作文