Question

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

As we all know it, many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling to. That’s why their parents don’t want him to fall behind at the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping with as many skills as possible. Therefore they won’t lose face when comparing their children with others’. Beside, they are sure these extra classes will help their children standing out and become more competitive in the future. Actually, it was unwise to force children to do that they don’t like. Too many training classes will be heavy burden for children. Parents shouldn’t push their children too hardly.

Answer 1

As we all know it(删掉), many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling to. That’s why(because) their parents don’t want him(them) to fall behind at the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping(equipped) with as many skills as possible. Therefore they won’t lose face when comparing their children with others’. Beside(Besides), they are sure these extra classes will help their children standing(stand) out and become more competitive in the future. Actually, it was(is) unwise to force children to do that(what) they don’t like. Too many training classes will be(a) heavy burden for children. Parents shouldn’t push their children too hardly(hard).