Question

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不记分。

My classmate Liu Hong is an warm-hearted girl．She is good at studying, singing, dancing and playing piano．After hear Sichuan earthquake, she felt very sad about it．She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people．First she calls her friends up and came up with having a benefit show．Then she handed out advertisement with her friends or put up signs asking people to watch．Luckily she did very good．A lot of people were moved and gave their hands to the Sichuan people．At last, she raised 5,000 yuan．She gave up all the money to the quake-hit areas．

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