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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m sorry to hear about your problem. Don’t be too concerning about it. Now I’d like to give you some advice. Firstly, you may have the heart-to-heart talk with your roommates. Perhaps they will realize their mistakes or correct them. Secondly, if you find hard to have a good talk with them, you may write a letter about them. Lastly, if these ways don’t work, you’d better to report it to your teacher, whom will help solve the problem. Good communication is the key to deal with the relationship with others. Maybe someday you should become good friends. I hope my advice will be of greatly help to you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】1. concerning----concerned

2. the-----a

3. or----and

4. find后加it

5. about---to

6. 去掉第7句第1个to

7. whom---who

8. deal---dealing

9. should---will

10. greatly----great

【解析】本文是一篇书信形式的写作。主要是针对朋友在关于寝室之间的人际相处中出现的问题，提出的几点建议。

“Don’t be too concerning about it”，be concerned about关心、挂念，为固定词组，故将concerning改为concerned。

“you may have the heart-to-heart talk with your roommates”，have a heart-to-heart talk with,和…谈心，为固定句式，故将the改为a。

“Perhaps they will realize their mistakes or correct them”，分析句子，realize their mistakes认识错误，和 correct them改正错误，是一种逻辑上的并列关系，故将or改为and。

“if you find hard to have a good talk with them”，分析句子结构，find是动词，hard是形容词，二者之间缺少宾语，故添加it,作形式宾语。

“you may write a letter about them”，write letters to sb.，给某人写信，故将about改为to。

“ you’d better to report it to your teacher”，had better do sth. 最好做某事，故将to删掉。

“ whom will help solve the problem”，分析句子结构，从句will help solve the problem缺少主语成分，应用who作为连接词。故将whom改为who。

“ Good communication is the key to deal with the relationship with others”，the key to doing sth.，to是介词，故将deal改为dealing。

“Maybe someday you should become good friends”，根据someday未来的某一天，表示将来时，故将should改为will。

“I hope my advice will be of greatly help to you”，be of+抽象名词=抽象名词的形容词形式，名词前可以用great、much等修饰，故将greatly改为great。