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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I am writing to tell you anything about the transportation in China.Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed network of public transportation.Besides,we have been decided to make efforts to make them much better.I am sure a network will satisfy your needs for traveling everywhere more convenient.People usually chose the means of transportation based with some aspects,such as the cost and the time needed.For example, businessmen are more likely travel by plane or high—speed train to save time while office worker tend to take buses or drive to work themselves.

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【解析】【1】 Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed network of public transportation.以ing结尾的形容词一般用来形容物，意为：令人……的，故应把amazed改为amazing。

【2】we have been decided to make efforts to make them much better.we和decide的关系为主动关系，故应把been去掉。

【3】 ……make efforts to make them much better，结合上一句，这里表达应该是：努力使公共交通网络变的更好。故应把them改成it。

【4】I am sure a network will satisfy your needs for……，

【5】……traveling everywhere more convenient，到处旅游更方便了，修饰动词应该用副词，故应把convenient改成conveniently。

【6】People usually chose the means of transportation……，这句话是在陈述一个事实，所以时态应该为一般现在时，故应把chose改成choose。

【7】……based with some aspects，短语词组based on意为：基于……。

【8】……such as the cost and the time needing.比如需要的花销和时间，cost，time和need之间为被动关系，故应把needing改成needed。

【9】businessmen are more likely travel by plane or high - speed train ……，固定搭配be likely to do sth 意为很有可能做某事，故应在likely后面加to。

【10】 ……while office worker tend to take buses or drive to work themselves.worker为可数名词，故应把worker改成workers。