Question

经过调查，人们对于学生上网交友持不同意见（见下表）。请你以“Should students make friends on line?”为题，用英语写一篇关于学生上网交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

词数：120左右

参考词汇： 网络朋友 on-line friend（s）；

上当受骗 to be cheated

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Different people have different opinions on whether students should make friends on line. Some people say yes．The reason is that the Internet helps make many new friends．What’s more, while Chatting on line, students can freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.

Others, however, just have the opposite opinion．They say making friends on line is a waste of time that should be spent more meaningfully on study．Besides, some students get cheated on line.

It’s my opinion that students should put their study, health and safety at first．As for friendship, we can readily find it among our classmates and other people around us.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语make friends交朋友；What’s more,而且；a waste of time浪费时间；As for至于；Different people have different opinions on whether students should make friends on line这个句子中whether引导的是on的宾语从句；The reason is that the Internet helps make many new friends．这个句子that引导的是表语从句；It’s my opinion that students should put their study, health and safety at first这个句子that引导的是opinion的同位语从句；

考点： 提纲类作文