Question

【题目】假如你是在宁夏学习的英国留学生Mike，最近从《新消息》上得知有大量的红嘴鸥（gulls )落户银川的湖泊，请你给该报报社写一份信， 内容包括：

1. 表达自己的喜悦心情 ；

2.对保护红嘴鸥提出一些建议。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir/Madame,

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Yours sincerely

Mike

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madame,

I am Mike, a British student studying in Ningxia. Knowing from your newspaper that a large number of gulls have chosen the lakes in Yinchuan as their habitats, I am writing to offer some suggestions.

First, I advise we should protect the lakes where the gulls live. Second, it would be a great idea if we don't spray pesticides on the plants around the lakes. Third, we had better raise people's awareness of protecting the birds through TV, newspaper and radio.

As a foreigner, I still feel it my responsibility to call on all people to do something for the gulls. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Mike

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是在宁夏学习的英国留学生Mike，最近从《新消息》上得知有大量的红嘴鸥（gulls )落户银川的湖泊，请你给该报报社写一份信， 内容包括：1. 表达自己的喜悦心情；2.对保护红嘴鸥提出一些建议。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：a large number of (许多)；offer some suggestions(提供建议)；spray pesticides(喷洒农药)；raise people's awareness of (提升人们……的意识)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。