题目内容
9.生活中冲突时有发生.你班同学苏华和李江在上周篮球赛打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张.请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报"Happy Teens"专栏投稿.| 简要描述事情的经过 | 打篮球、碰撞(bump into each other)、争执,等等 |
| 分析发生冲突的原因 | 1.遇事不够冷静 |
| 2.…太注重得失… | |
| 谈谈避免冲突的做法 | (请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法) |
1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译.
2.词数100左右.开头已经写好,不计入总词数.
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如班级、人名等.
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.
分析 这是一篇表格类的看图作文,要求以冲突为话题,描述给定情境,分析现象并提出建议.话题贴近时代,贴近生活,贴近学生,提示内容少,发挥空间大,考生有话可写,体现了新课标背景下的命题方向.范文思路清晰,结构合理,内容涵盖了表格内的所有要点,有适当发挥,主题得到了升华.
亮点句型一:To avoid such conflicts,we should be kind to one another,which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life.为了避免这种冲突,我们应该善待对方,这是必不可少的享受和谐生活.本句中动词不定式 To avoid such conflicts在句中做目的状语;which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life是一个非限制性定语从句.
亮点句型二:It is also a virtue to forgive and forget,especially in such a competitive and stressful society.宽恕和遗忘也是一种美德,特别是在这样一个充满竞争和压力的社会里.本句中it是形式主语,真正的主语是动词不定式to forgive and forget.
解答 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.During the basketball game yesterday afternoon,Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other,trying to catch the ball.Then they started shouting and yelling,and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest,it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame-they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things.They cared too much about winning and losing.As a matter of fact,blocking,pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts,we should be kind to one another,which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life.(亮点句型一)It is also a virtue to forgive and forget,especially in such a competitive and stressful society.(亮点句型二)Instead of blaming each other,we should communicate more and put ourselves in others'place.
Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate.We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
About five minutes later the cashier (37)A told us,"Oh,good!Someone's coming!"It was a woman with two little kids.As the woman reached for her (38)A,the cashier,handing her the (39)C,told her that (40)D wanted to,anonymously,buy her family's ice cream.She couldn't (41)B it."Seriously?"she asked.Rachel and I (42)C not to notice.It was great.The cashier,aware that we wanted to remain anonymous,came over to"wipe off our table,"(43)Aleaving our change on our table.She was about as (44)Das we were.
After enjoying our ice cream,we took a napkin(纸巾) and wrote a (45)B to the cashier thanking her for her assistance.We (46)B until she went to the back room,quickly (47)A the note,a nice tip,and a second Smile Card on the (48)C,and ran out before we were seen.
I treasure every date night with my daughter and (49)B the world through her eyes is always(50)D for me.
| 31.A.date | B.game | C.dinner | D.travel |
| 32.A.preparing | B.looking | C.asking | D.paying |
| 33.A.nice | B.next | C.poor | D.last |
| 34.A.responsibility | B.politeness | C.understanding | D.kindness |
| 35.A.refused | B.changed | C.took | D.borrowed |
| 36.A.warm-hearted | B.unfortunate | C.lucky | D.curious |
| 37.A.quietly | B.quickly | C.loudly | D.slowly |
| 38.A.wallet | B.glasses | C.ice cream | D.phone |
| 39.A.money | B.napkin | C.Smile Card | D.change |
| 40.A.no one | B.anyone | C.none | D.someone |
| 41.A.accept | B.believe | C.follow | D.doubt |
| 42.A.decided | B.hoped | C.pretended | D.intended |
| 43.A.secretly | B.seriously | C.openly | D.friendly |
| 44.A.nervous | B.embarrassed | C.surprised | D.happy |
| 45.A.notice | B.note | C.check | D.paragraph |
| 46.A.ate | B.waited | C.wrote | D.left |
| 47.A.placed | B.gave | C.handed | D.passed |
| 48.A.newspaper | B.chair | C.counter | D.floor |
| 49.A.changing | B.seeing | C.hearing | D.exploring |
| 50.A.difficult | B.funny | C.distant | D.fantastic |