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假定你是米易中学高一学生李华，到校学习已经半学期了。现在请你根据以下写作要点和要求给你的父母写一封英文信，告知你的所见所闻、所感所悟。
写作要点：
1．学校简介：位于攀枝花南部；环境舒适
2．师资团队：教师耐心、严格；受学生欢迎
3．学科发展：想学理科/文科；并给出原因（自拟两条）文科 Liberal arts理科  Science
4．询问父母近况
要求：
1．短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
3．书写须清晰、工整。4．信件中不能出现本人真实信息。
Dear dad and mom,
It’s almost three months since I left you. How I miss you!
Now,                                                                         

Dear dad and mom,
It’s almost three months since I left you. How I miss you! Now, I want to tell you what I have seen and how I'm feeling at Miyi Senior High.
Miyi Senior High , which lies in the south of PanZhiHua City. Its environment is pretty quiet and beautiful, and first-class facilities afford us a good chance to work hard. I'm very satisfied with the teachers as well. As far as I know, not only are they patient with the students, but also strict in studies. They are well received by(are popular with) the students.
As for my studies, I'd like to choose science subjects. On one hand, I'm interested in science and have made great progress. On the other hand, science subjects challenge my potentials and I will have a promising future.
How is everything with you these days? I hope that you are not too tired and do care about yourself.
I’m looking forward to receiving your early reply.

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：这篇作文的提纲很详细，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要根据所给要点，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确，思路清晰。把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be satisfied with 对…满意，be well received by(are popular with)受…欢迎，As for 至于，make great progress做出很大的进步，care about关心，It’s almost three months since I left you. 这句话用了固定句型，Now, I want to tell you what I have seen and how I'm feeling at Miyi Senior High.这句话用了宾语从句， Miyi Senior High , which lies in the south of PanZhiHua City. 这句话用了定语从句， As far as I know, not only are they patient with the students, but also strict in studies. 这句话用了倒装句，还有范文使用了 On one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。
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阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Two University of Colorado professors said they have demonstrated(证明) the teachers’ use of red pens in marking corrections and grading papers often affects students negatively and destroys teacher-student relationships.
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The Colorado study suggested that because red is an “emotive” color expressing an exciting emotion, corrections penned in red ink were more likely to be seen by students as “shouting”, an “emotional loading” that could cause anxiety or feelings of blame against the teacher and lead to rejection of otherwise constructive feedback. Instead, teachers should use blue pens to mark papers, Richard Dukes and Healther Albanesi concluded.
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【写作内容】
以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
以约120个词就老师批改学生作业的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
简述老师用红笔批改学生作业的利与弊；
谈谈你对老师用红笔批改学生作业的看法；
作为中学生，我们应该如何配合老师批改作业？
【写作要求】
作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
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请根据以下提示并结合一个事例，就“潜能无限”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。
As we all know, one’s potential is limitless. Especially in times of crisis, you can never imagine how powerful one’s potential will be. Therefore, it’s unwise to set limits to your potential.
注意：
不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；
文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数120以上。   
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注意：1.词数：100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. As they say, “As you sow, so shall you reap（收获）.”
注意：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示；
2. 除诗歌外，文体不限；
3 .文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
4. 词数为120左右。
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内容要点：
1.许多家长用金钱，旅游等承诺鼓励孩子努力学习，考上一所好大学；
2 可能会导致学生只关注物质奖励，而减少学习乐趣；
3.一旦获得想要的奖励就失去了学习动力；
4.你的建议。
注意：1.不要逐词逐句地翻译。
2 为使语句连贯，可以适当增加细节。
3 词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Editor,
With the college entrance examiation approaching…
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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（字数120词左右，可紧扣题目适当发挥）
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请结合自身和周围同学实际，试分析
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3. 词数120左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The one-child policy has been adopted in China for decades.
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