Question

【题目】阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

On Friday evening, Emmett and I went to a movie as scheduled. After purchasing the tickets and drinks, we entered the cinema with delight beforehand, waiting for the beginning of the movie.

When I got up in the middle of the movie, Emmett whispered, “ Carter, where are you going?” “I forgot to call my mom to tell her what time to pick us up.” I whispered back, leaving my jacket on the seat.

I squeezed past the people in my row, trying not to step on any feet while still watching the screen. I didn’t want to miss a thing. Balfour, the good guy in the movie, was trapped in an underground cave.

When I came back, Balfour’s flashlight almost went out. An enormous snake was moving toward him, twisting its body. Balfour struggled to loosen the chains around his hands and feet to reach his magic cape (魔法斗篷). With the cape around him, he could completely disappear.

I crawled (缓慢行进) back across eight people (I counted on the way out), never taking my eyes off the screen. I sat down in my seat slowly, then picked up my drink, and swallowed it quickly. But suddenly my brain said, “That’s not coke. That’s lemonade.” I looked down at the cup, just as the girl next to me shouted, “He drank my lemonade!”

“Shhhh!” the people around us said, making quiet complaints.

“Where’s Emmett?” I asked, as if the girl had hidden him under her seat.

“Carter, down here,” Emmett answered in a low voice. He was two rows ahead of me. I was in the wrong row! Everyone was turning around to look at me.

“Here,” I said, handing the girl her drink.

“Eww,” she said. “You have had a drink of it, so you owe me a lemonade.”

“Shhhh!” everyone said again.

“OK, OK,” I said, starting my crawl across eight sets of feet again. Everybody were complaining as I inched out.

“Don’t come back,” the boy on the end said.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；

2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1

But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.

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Paragraph 2

I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.

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Answer 1

【答案】But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade. I bought a lemonade, took a deep breath, and went back. This time, I bent low, looking at every person on the end of each row. When I saw the same boy, I moved through fast to get back to that girl. Unfortunately, I stepped on a boy’s feet and banged my knee. After apologized to him, I quickly fell into the seat next to the girl and handed her the lemonade. Everyone around us all turned to stare at me again with some complaints.

I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t. Maybe I would just stay there until the movie ended. Thanking me for the lemonade, the girl talked about the plots I missed. I whispered back, “Thanks.” When the lights of the cinema came on, I grabbed my jacket on the seat and hurried out. Emmett caught up with me, “Do you know that girl?” “No.” I answered. “Then why do you have her jacket?” I looked down and found a bright pink jacket. “Here I go again,” I said with embarrassment, spotting the girl in the crowd.

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写。周五晚上，作者和埃米特按计划去看了一场电影，在看电影期间作者去给妈妈打电话，回来了作者发现自己做错了座位，还误喝了一个女孩的柠檬水。

1.第一段给出的首句是But the problem was that I had to come back to bring this girl a new lemonade.这一句是故事发展的转折点。可以从“我买了一杯柠檬水，深吸了一口气，走了回去。这一次，我弯下腰，看着每一行末尾的每一个人。还是踩到了一个男孩的脚，迅速坐到女孩旁边的座位上，递给她柠檬水。周围的人都转过头来，抱怨着又盯着作者看。——无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。

2.第二段所给首句I thought about crawling out of this row and back into Emmett’s row, but I couldn’t.这一句呼应前文，紧接着可以从“也许我会一直呆在那里直到电影结束。这时要续写女孩谈到了作者错过的情节。作者低声说：“谢谢。”当电影院的灯亮了，作者抓起座位上的夹克就匆匆出去了。埃米特追上作者，“你认识那个女孩吗？“没有。”作者回答。“那你为什么拿她的夹克？“作者低头一看，发现了一件亮粉色的夹克衫。“作者很尴尬，在人群中看到了那个女孩。