Question

据报道,我国学生近视率居世界第一。造成这一现象的原因是多方面的, 请你以 "Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?" 为题, 写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括：
1. 造成学生近视的原因；
2. 如何保护视力？
注意: 1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3.短文的开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 近视率 rate of myopia
Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?
It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?
　　It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.
The causes of myopia are complicated. Firstly, too much homework leads to the lack of time for exercise and a good sleep. Long time of studying makes it difficult to refresh eyesight. Secondly, medical research shows genetic factors also contribute to poor eyesight. In addition, many students don’t form good eye care habits. For example, when reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.
　　Realizing the reasons of this result, it’s time for us to take measures to protect eyesight. I think the most important is to encourage students to engage in more outdoor activities and create a vision-friendly studying environment.

解析试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，写的是根据我国学生近视率居世界第一这一现象进行分析，主要包括以下两个方面：1. 造成学生近视的原因；2. 如何保护视力？
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如：be ranked  as 名列。。。，，lead to ,导致 ，contribute to 有助于，导致，还有加分的句型：Long time of studying makes it difficult to refresh eyesight.（ it做形式宾语），when reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.（状语从句的省略），it’s time for us to take measures to protect eyesight（it’s time to do sth 该做某事了）并且主语了句子的衔接如：firstly…… secondly ……in addition….. 用于列举近视的原因，for example 例如，用于举例说明 ，等。
考点：提纲作文写作。