题目内容
1.假设你叫李明,你的初中同学王强到贵阳读高中,他来信告诉你,他的英语跟不上那里学生的英语水平,课堂上听不懂,不知道怎样才能提高英语,希望你给他提些有关英语学习的建议.现在请你根据以下内容提示给他写一封回信.
要点如下:
1.对他在英语学习方面有困难表示关心,并愿意提供帮助.
2.给他提出建议:①每天背单词、短语,丰富词汇量;②多听英语录音或光盘,模仿准确的语音语调,提高听力;③课外多阅读,提高阅读能力;
3.提出希望:希望他在英语方面能取得进步,并赶上其他同学.
注意:
1.书信必须包括以上提供的内容要点,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯;
2.词数:词数100左右;
参考词汇:记住:memorize;丰富:enrich;语调:intonation
Dear Wang Qiang,
I'm glad to hear from you.I'm very sorry that you have some trouble with your English.Now let me give you some advice on how to learn English.
First,you should memorize more words and expressions so that you can enrich your vocabulary,which is very important in English learning.(高分句型一)Second,you'd better listen more to some English tapes or CDs and try to follow the correct pronunciation and intonation.In this way you can improve your listening so that you can understand your teacher better in class.(高分句型二)Third,you can do more reading out of school in order to improve your reading skills.
I hope that my advice can help you.I also hope that you will make progress in English and catch up with your classmates soon.(高分句型三)
Best wishes for you!
Yours
Li Ming.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假设你叫李明,你的初中同学王强到贵阳读高中,他来信告诉你,他的英语跟不上那里学生的英语水平,课堂上听不懂,不知道怎样才能提高英语,希望你给他提些有关英语学习的建议.现在请你根据以下内容提示给他写一封回信.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:对他在英语学习方面有困难表示关心,并愿意提供帮助.给他提出建议:①每天背单词、短语,丰富词汇量;②多听英语录音或光盘,模仿准确的语音语调,提高听力;③课外多阅读,提高阅读能力;提出希望:希望他在英语方面能取得进步,并赶上其他同学. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:hear from收到某人的信息;have some trouble with 在…方面有困难;First首先;Second其次;Third第三;enrich your vocabulary丰富你的词汇;In this way以这种方式;in order to以便,为了
First,you should memorize more words and expressions so that you can enrich your vocabulary,which is very important in English learning.(高分句型一)
In this way you can improve your listening so that you can understand your teacher better in class.(高分句型二)
I also hope that you will make progress in English and catch up with your classmates soon.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Wang Qiang,
I'm glad to hear from you.I'm very sorry that you have some trouble with your English.Now let me give you some advice on how to learn English.
First,you should memorize more words and expressions so that you can enrich your vocabulary,which is very important in English learning.(高分句型一)Second,you'd better listen more to some English tapes or CDs and try to follow the correct pronunciation and intonation.In this way you can improve your listening so that you can understand your teacher better in class.(高分句型二)Third,you can do more reading out of school in order to improve your reading skills.
I hope that my advice can help you.I also hope that you will make progress in English and catch up with your classmates soon.(高分句型三)
Best wishes for you!
Yours,
Li Ming
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.