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8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，
so I'd like to tell you everything about it．
In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive．As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day．Now things are begun to change．The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future．They had taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on．Of course，it's strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur．
Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China．What's more，their living conditions have greatly improved．

分析 本段文字讲述了关于羚羊保护的情况．过去很多人杀死羚羊利用它的毛皮来获取利润，结果导致羚羊的数量日渐减少．现在政府以及当地群众开始采取强有力的措施保护羚羊，他们采取已经采取了很多有效措施，像制定严格的法律，建立羚羊自然保护区等，当然还强烈禁止买卖任何羚羊毛皮制品．如今让我们高兴的是，在中国羚羊的数量越来越多，而且羚羊的生存条件也得到了大大的改善．

解答 I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so I'd like to tell you everything about it．In the past，some people kill antelopes for
                                                                                                                                                      something                                                    killed
their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive．As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day．Now things are
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begun to change．The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die∧in the future．They had taken many effecti
beginning                                                                                                                                                                      out                           have
ve measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，settingup several reserves for the antelopes，and so on．Of course，it's strong prohibited to buy or
                                                                protect                                                                                                                               strongly
sell anything made of antelopes fur．
                                antelope
Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China．What's more，their living conditions have greatly improved．
                                             去掉 much
1．everything改为something；考查不定代词，根据语境，应该是"关于羚羊保护的一些事情"，而不是"每一件事情"，所以用everything．
2．kill改为killed；考查时态，根据前面的时间状语"In the past"得知这里要用过去时态，所以改为killed．
3．the改为a；考查冠词的用法，as a result 是一个固定搭配，意为"结果是"．
4．begun改为beginning；考查句子的时态，时间状语是now，所以句子要用现在进行时．
5．die后面加上out；根据语境这句话的意思应该是"将来羚羊将会灭绝"，die out是固定搭配，"灭绝"的意思，所以在die后面加上out．
6．had改为have；考查时态，本文讲述的是一个现实情况，用现在的某种时态，根据上下文语境，这里要用现在完成时．
7．protecting改为protect；考查动词，不定时to后面跟动词原形．
8．strong改为strongly；考查词性，后面修饰的是动词prohibited，所以要用副词strongly．
9．antelopes改为antelope；考查名词作定语，英语中的名词单数可以作定语修饰名词．
10．去掉much；考查形容词，more and more意为"越来越多的"much在前面多余，所以去掉．

点评 短文改错首先要从整体上把握短文的中心思想，了解短文的基本时态，再从细节上分析句子成分，运用词汇，语法，时态等基本知识找出文中的错误加以修改．

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