题目内容

7．写作内容
假设你是李华，你上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr Li 反映：
1．新书太少
2．书架上的书比较混乱
3．阅览室的一盏灯坏了
4．管理员工作时彼此闲聊，读者无法安心看书
注意：
1．词数100-120左右
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3．信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数
Dear Mr Li，
Last Sunday，I went to do some reading in your library．Over the time I was there，I found something unpleasant．Therefore，I'd like to voice my opinions，which，I hope，would be of help for you to create a more comfortable place for readers．（高分句型一）
First，there are few books on the shelf and most books are not popular today．Second，some books are not sorted in proper order，making it difficult to find what they want quickly．（高分句型二）Third，the assistants didn't offer good service．Instead，they were chatting．In addition，they took no notice of the fact that a light wasn't working．Leave this state of affairs to say the same，and I am afraid there will be fewer readers．
So，for the sake of readers，I suggest that you change all these as soon as possible．
Yours，
LiHua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr Li 反映，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：新书太少；书架上的书比较混乱；阅览室的一盏灯坏了；管理员工作时彼此闲聊，读者无法安心看书 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Therefore因此；be of help有帮助的；Firs首先；Second其次；Third第三；took no notice of 忽视，不理睬；for the sake of为了…起见；as soon as possible 尽可能地块
Therefore，I'd like to voice my opinions，which，I hope，would be of help for you to create a more comfortable place for readers．（高分句型一）
Second，some books are not sorted in proper order，making it difficult to find what they want quickly．（高分句型二）
 So，for the sake of readers，I suggest that you change all these mentioned as soon as possible．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Li
       Last Sun day，I went to do some reading in your library．Over the time I  was there，I found something unpleasant．Therefore，I'd like to voice my opinions，which，I hope，would be of help for you to create a more comfortable place for readers．（高分句型一）
       First，there are few books on the shelf and most books are not popular today．Second，some books are not sorted in proper order，making it difficult to find what they want quickly．（高分句型二）Third，the assistants didn't offer good service．Instead，they were chatting．In addition，they took no notice of the fact that a light wasn't working．Leave this state of affairs to say the same，and I am afraid there will be fewer readers．
      So，for the sake of readers，I suggest that you change all these mentioned as soon as possible．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li  Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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