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14．假如你是李华．你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵．3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，他特地发来邮件寻求你的建议．请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件，信的内容包括：
1．推荐一个礼物；
2．你的理由；
3．其他和解建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．
If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．
As far as I know，Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body．In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship．Besides，taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport．It's convenient for him to get around as well．
Apart from giving him a gift，you can also adopt other means，such as travelling，seeing a movie，having dinner and going shopping．No matter what you do，being sincere is the most important．I really hope that we can be good friends forever．
yours，
Li Hua．

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．
如果我是你，我会考虑把自行车作为生日礼物送给他．
高分句型二：
In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship．
同时，你们可以经常去骑自行车一起郊游，这有助于重建你们的友谊．

解答 Dear Tom，
     I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．（高分句型一）
     As far as I know，Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body．In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship（高分句型二）．Besides，taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport．It's convenient for him to get around as well．
   Apart from giving him a gift，you can also adopt other means，such as travelling，seeing a movie，having dinner and going shopping．No matter what you do，being sincere is the most important．I really hope that we can be good friends forever．
                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．

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