题目内容
4.最近你班将举行一场题为 Life in the future 的讨论会,请根据以下要点,写一篇100左右的发言稿.1.随着医学的发展,人类的平均寿命将会达到120岁.
2.由于新能源的出现,污染问题将得到控制.
3.人们的日常生活也将有很大的变化.如机器人可以为你做家务;椅子的也按色能 够随着你所穿的衣服而改变;手机可以带在手腕上,通话时可以看到对方;可以乘坐新型的电梯进入太空度假.
分析 篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息最近你班将举行一场题为 Life in the future 的讨论会,请根据以下要点,写一篇100左右的发言稿,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:随着医学的发展,人类的平均寿命将会达到120岁.由于新能源的出现,污染问题将得到控制.人们的日常生活也将有很大的变化.如机器人可以为你做家务;椅子的也按色能 够随着你所穿的衣服而改变;手机可以带在手腕上,通话时可以看到对方;可以乘坐新型的电梯进入太空度假. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:
In the future将来;different from不同;with the development of 随着…发展;the age of…年纪;because of因为;under control在…控制下;For example例如等.
First,with the development of medicine,on the average,a person will live to the age of about 120.(高分句型一)
Third,people's daily life will change greatly,too.For example,robots will do all your housework for you; your chair will change its color to match what you're wearing; you can also put your mobile phone around your wrist and can see the caller while speaking; you even can take a new elevator into space for your holidays.(高分句型二)
解答 In the future,man's life will be very different from that of today.First,with the development of medicine,on the average,a person will live to the age of about 120.(高分句型一)Second,because of the discovery of new energy,the environmental pollution will be under control.Third,people's daily life will change greatly,too.For example,robots will do all your housework for you; your chair will change its color to match what you're wearing; you can also put your mobile phone around your wrist and can see the caller while speaking; you even can take a new elevator into space for your holidays.(高分句型二)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
The (19)A was arranged through BUNAC,a work and volunteer organization. (20)C it cost me around $1,000--a sum which I (21)D mostly by working part-time.
The self-indulgent(放纵自己的) image is (22)C to overseas volunteer projects.However,the work can be (23)B.I spent my time maintaining trails,building fences and carrying out projects in some of the national monuments of America.Summer temperatures in Arizona stay well above 35℃,(24)B pleasant if you're carrying 50kg of concrete for 10hours at a time.And then there was the wildlife to deal with,which (25)C my strength of character and made my (26)A of the English household spider disappear.
(27)D do most people volunteer for?Probably they want to (28)B things to the world.But in reality,you (29)D just as much as the local communities and ecosystems you're helping.
Spending 10 weeks in America's most beautiful national parks and forests was (30)D.I gained a far deeperC31Cof the local environment than the average tourist,(32)B ex-national park rangers(护林者) who knew(33)A of the area's history and ecosystem.But best of all,my 10weeks were spent volunteering with young people from a mix of (34)C--from Belgians to South Koreans.When I left Arizona,I returned home having made a lifelong (35)Dwith people from around the world.
| 16.A.aspect | B.experience | C.impression | D.observation |
| 17.A.choice | B.dream | C.habit | D.destination |
| 18.A.explore | B.develop | C.preserve | D.find |
| 19.A.trip | B.fund | C.organization | D.conference |
| 20.A.In other words | B.As a result | C.In all | D.On average |
| 21.A.awarded | B.sponsored | C.invested | D.covered |
| 22.A.similar | B.equal | C.relevant | D.close |
| 23.A.easy-going | B.hard-going | C.interesting | D.instructive |
| 24.A.still | B.never | C.yet | D.even |
| 25.A.enriched | B.challenged | C.improved | D.affected |
| 26.A.fear | B.curiosity | C.frustration | D.dislike |
| 27.A.Why | B.How | C.Who | D.What |
| 28.A.take out | B.give back | C.make up | D.bring in |
| 29.A.succeed | B.remember | C.learn | D.benefit |
| 30.A.unreal | B.unbearable | C.unbelievable | D.unforgettable |
| 31.A.meaning | B.appreciation | C.understanding | D.commitment |
| 32.A.interviewing | B.meeting | C.inviting | D.recording |
| 33.A.perfectly | B.partly | C.naturally | D.vividly |
| 34.A.origins | B.platform | C.cultures | D.schools |
| 35.A.campaign | B.promises | C.contest | D.bond |
| 理 由 | 1.家乡需要(环境现状等) |
| 2.政策优惠(贷款税收等) | |
| 3… | |
| 建 议 | 1多做积累(经验技术知识等) |
| 2.… |
preferential policy 优惠政策
注意:
1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译.
2词数150 左右,开头和结尾又记入总词数.
3作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名人名等.
Dear Linda,
In your e-mail you say you are not sure whether you return home or not after graduation.I think it is better for you to come back.
I hope what I have written here can be of some help to you.All the best!
Yours
Mary.