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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It has been a long time since I did anything good for the environment. Feeling responsible to protect the environment, I decided to take the action again. I told my idea to my friends and we planned to plant tree on the hill in the countryside. We came to the foot of the hill and selected a place where looked suitably and settled down. We spend a few hours digging holes and placing the young seedlings. Then we wrote our wishes on cards one to one and buried it deep down the roots of the trees. We also took a lot of pictures. We were such busy that we didn't realize that it was time to go back. I felt really glad that we made difference to the environment.

Answer 1

【答案】①anything改为 something；②take the action去掉the；③tree改为trees ；④where改为 that /which ；⑤suitably改为 suitable；⑥spend 改为spent ；⑦to改为by ；⑧it 改为 them；⑨such改为 so ；⑩made 后加a

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，作者讲述了和朋友们种树保护环境，呼吁人们保护环境。

① 考查代词。代词anything通常用于疑问句和否定句中，something通常用于肯定句中。本句是肯定句，所以使用代词something。故将anything改为 something。

② 考查动词短语。take action固定短语“采取行动”，定冠词the是多余的。故去掉the。

③考查名词单复数。名词tree是可数名词，本句使用复数形式trees表示种植很多树。故将tree改为trees。

④ 考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是a place，后面定语从句缺少主语，所以使用关系代词which/that指代先行词，在句中做主语。故将where改为 that /which。

⑤考查形容词。在英语中形容词通常和系动词构成系表空后，而副词通常做状语。本句中系动词look与形容词suitable构成系表结构。故将suitably改为 suitable。

⑥ 考查时态。本句叙述过去我和朋友们种树的故事，所以要使用一般过去时。故将spend 改为spent 。

⑦考查固定搭配。one by one 固定短语“一个接一个”。句意：接着我们在卡片上一个接一个地写下我们的愿望并把它们都埋在树根下面。故将to改为by。

⑧ 考查代词。本句中使用代词them指代复数名词cards，而it通常指代单数名词，故将it 改为 them。

⑨ 考查固定结构。句式so/such...that...固定句型“如此......以至于......”，so后要接形容词或副词；而such后面要接名词。本句中busy是形容词，所以such改为 so。

⑩考查动词短语。make a difference固定短语“起作用，有影响”。句意：我很高兴我们能够对环境保护起作用。故made 后加a。