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假设你是李华,2014年冬奥会就要到了,学校就My favorite sport开展征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文投稿。
1. 介绍你喜欢的运动项目;2. 喜欢这一运动项目的理由;3. 做运动时要注意的事项。
注意:1. 词数100----120左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。


My favorite sport
Though there are different kinds of sports, swimming is my favorite. It was a very exciting experience to learn swimming with my parents when I was five years old.
Swimming is a really good sport. It makes me feel relaxed. This sport can make me stay healthy and strong, because I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming.
Before going to swim, we should pay attention to three points. The first is to make your body in a better state. The second is that do not eat too much. The last is that you had better swim with some friends. These can help you stay safe and enjoy yourself.

解析试题分析:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,而且很具体,考生要把要点解释清楚,不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外,还要阐述自己的观点,这就要求考生自己拓展发挥,在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组:pay attention to注意,stay safe保持安全,范文中的句式多变,运用不同的语法知识:  Though there are different kinds of sports, swimming is my favorite. It was a very exciting experience to learn swimming with my parents when I was five years old.这句话用了it做形式主语, This sport can make me stay healthy and strong, because I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming.这句话用了every time引导时间状语从句, The first is to make your body in a better state.这句话用了不定式做表语, The second is that do not eat too much. The last is that you had better swim with some friends. 这两句话用了表语从句。
考点:考查提纲类书面表达

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A minute later, a young airline employee showed up. Hardly looking at the old man, she told Dana to get aboard her plane. She said the old man would be okay, and walked away.
Dana screamed for help. An airport supervisor appeared. He told Dana to get on the plane. Dana said that she was not moving until an ambulance arrived. The supervisor said her plane would leave without her. Dana said that she didn’t care.
An ambulance and two doctors finally arrived. The paramedics said that the man would be okay, but he would need stitches(缝线). They put him into the ambulance and drove off.
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“The plane?” Dana asked. “Who cares about the plane? How could you be so cold? That was an old man; he could have been your grandfather! How would you like it if everyone just stepped over your grandfather and went on their way?”
【写作内容】
1、以约30词概括上文的主要内容;
2、以约120词谈谈你阅读了该故事后的感受,内容包括:
(1) 当时在场的人是怎样的一种心理?
(2) 如果你当时也在场,你将如何处理?
(3) 你对整个事件作如何评价?
【写作要求】
1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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