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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was in high school,each of my friend had a bicycle.I hoped I could also have it.One day I saw a second-hand bicycle,that was only one hundred yuan.I asked my father the money.And he said he could only give me half of the money.I should find the other half myself.So I went to sell newspapers after the school.My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after.He gives me the other fifty.You can imagine how happily I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

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【解析】第一处：考查名词及固定搭配的应用。When I was in high school,each of my friend had a bicycle.句意：当我在高中时，我的每一个朋友都有自行车。each of+名词复数。故friend改为friends。

第二处：考查代词及语境的应用。I hoped I could also have it.句意：我希望我也能有一个。代词应用one。故it改为one。

第三处：考查关系代词的应用。One day I saw a second-hand bicycle,that was only one hundred yuan.此句为非限定性定语从句，先行词不能用that，要用which。故that改为which。

第四处：考查固定搭配及语境的应用。I asked my father the money.句意：我问我的爸爸要钱。ask...for问...要...。故father后加for。

第五处：考查前后语句的联系。I asked my father the money.And he said he could only give me half of the money.句意：我问爸爸要钱，但是他说他只能给我一半钱。故And改为But。

第六处：考查短语的应用。So I went to sell newspapers after the school句意：所以我放学后去卖报纸。after school放学之后。故去掉the。

第七处：考查形容词的应用。My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after此句的主语为形容词，所以形容词应用-ed形式。故pleasing改为pleased。

第八处：考查副词的应用。 when I showed him the money a month after.句意：在一个月之后我给他看我的钱。故after改为later。

第九处：考查动词过去式的应用。本文的故事都是发生在过去，所以谓语动词应用过去式。故give改为gave。

第十处：考查形容词的应用。You can imagine how happily I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.how+形容词。故happily改为happy。