题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你的英国笔友杰克打算来中国旅行,来信让你推荐几个最值得去的旅游目的地。请你用英语给他写封回信,并说明推荐理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数); 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I'm glad that you are coming to visit China.There are three places I want to recommend to you.
First, you can visit Beijing, the capital of China, where you can enjoy the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. Then you can go to visit Mount Tai in Shandong Province. It is one of the most famous mountains in China and you can enjoy the amazing sunrise there. Next, I suggest you visit Hangzhou, a beautiful modern city with breathtaking natural sights. The West Lake there is a well-known tourist attraction.
I can act as your guide if you like, and I am ready to offer help whenever you need it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是半开放式作文。要求给来中国旅游的英国笔友杰克推荐几个最值得去的旅游目的地,并说明推荐理由。写好文章的关键是认真审题,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提示,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信,格式正确,内容符合要求,语句简介、通顺,结构布局合理,同时文章使用多种句式。I'm glad that you are coming to visit China.that引导宾语从句;There are three places I want to recommend to you. There be句型中包含定语从句;you can visit Beijing, the capital of China, where you can enjoy the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and some beautiful parks. where引导定语从句;I suggest you visit Hangzhou, a beautiful modern city with breathtaking natural sights.suggest宾语从句中含有一个同位语;I am ready to offer help whenever you need it. whenever引导状语从句。