Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误, 每句最多两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jack,

I was sorry to hear that you are suffering from short-sightedness.

To be frank, almost eight students out ten in my class have to wear glasses to live a normal school life, include me. Many factors contribute to this phenomenon. First, us Chinese students who live under a great burden of examinations. We have to fight our way in life with millions of peers. Second, most of us with short-sightedness don’t have a good habit of using our eye, due to neither lack of knowledge of protecting eyes or carelessness.

In this case, I strong recommend that you not use your computer for such long a time any more. However, you should change your habit of reading in bed. Hopefully, your short-sightedness can be corrected by wearing proper glasses.

All in all, don’t worry. It’s no big deal!

Yours, sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】第一处：考查系动词与主语的对应。此句为一般现在时，主语为I，则对应的系动词应为am。故was该为你am。

第二处：考查介词的应用。To be frank, almost eight students out ten in my class have to wear glasses to live a normal school life, include me. 此处中的关系为包含关系。故out后加of。

第三处：考查动名词的应用。in my class have to wear glasses to live a normal school life, include me.此处的include做状语，应用动名词形式。故include改为including。

第四处：考查人称代词的应用。 First, us Chinese students who live under a great burden of examinations.此处位置为主语，应用we。故us改为we。

第五处：考查句子结构的应用。First, us Chinese students who live under a great burden of examinations.此句为简单句，不用关系代词who。故去掉who。

第六处：考查名词复数的应用。most of us with short-sightedness don’t have a good habit of using our eye, 眼睛在句中一般都用复数形式，且前面的人是复数。故eye改为eyes。

第七处：考查固定搭配的应用。don’t have a good habit of using our eye, due to neither lack of knowledge of protecting eyes or carelessness.此处应为短语either or。故neither改为either。

第八处：考查副词的应用。 I strong recommend that you not use your computer for such long a time any more. 此处的词修饰动词 recommend，修饰动词应用副词。故strong改为strongly。

第九处：考查形容词的应用。 I strong recommend that you not use your computer for such long a time any more. 此处修饰形容词long，应用so。故such改为so。

第十处：考查转折词的应用。However, you should change your habit of reading in bed.此处的关系不是转折关系。故However改为Moreover/Besides。