Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华， 正在英国某中学作交换生。 学校附近新开的购物中心(shopping mall)的音乐噪音让同学们很烦恼。 请你就此用英语给购物中心负责人写封信，要点如下：

1. 噪音对同学们的影响；

2. 你的要求及建议（上课时间调低音量， 休息时间关闭,播放轻柔音乐）。

要求： 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam，

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/madam,

I am a student in the school near your shopping mall. Recently, your mall plays loud music even day from morning till night, which affects us students greatly. As a result, we can't focus in class and have difficulty sleeping well at night.

Therefore. I hope you will turn the music down while we are having class during the day and turn it off during the rest time at noon and night. Resides, I'd like to suggest you play some soft music instead, which would free us from being disturbed as well as relax your customers.

We would greatly appreciate it if you could take our request into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。本文要求考生以正在英国某中学作交换生的李华的身份给购物中心负责人写封信，投诉该中心的音乐噪音对同学们的影响。文章要使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 噪音对同学们的影响：上课无法集中注意力听讲，晚上很难入睡；2. 你的要求及建议（上课时间调低音量， 休息时间关闭,播放轻柔音乐）；建议在写作时候，适当添加合适的串联词，让要点之间的联系更为紧密。同时尽量使用考生熟悉的句式结构，以增加获得高分的可能性。