假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The winter holiday is coming，that makes me excited．I had been looking forward at relaxing myself．I'd like to go skating，climb mountains and see several movie．I think I can play the basketball with my classmates．It will surely be a wonderful time!However，my parents think different．They don't want me go out．They are afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck，fallen off a tree，or fight with others．Therefore，they are afraid I will lose my way．I hate being treated like a bird kept in a cage．To get more freedom，I will try to persuade him．

分析寒假要到了，我激动不已．一直盼望可以好好轻松一下了，滑冰，爬山，看电影，还可以和同学打打球．多美好啊！可我的父母不这样想，他们不让我出去，担心我被车碰了，从树上摔下来，或者是和别人打架，还担心我跑丢了．感觉就像一只笼子里的小鸟．为了自由，我要说服他们．

解答 The winter holiday is coming，that makes me excited．
                                             which
I had been looking forward at relaxing myself．
have                               to
I'd like to go skating，climb mountains and see several movie．
                                                                                  movies
I think I can play the basketball with my classmates．

It will surely be a wonderful time!However，my parents think different．
                                                                                            differently
They don't want me∧go out．They are afraid I'll be knocked down by a truck，fallen off a tree，
                               加to                                                                                      fall
or fight with others．Therefore，they are afraid I will lose my way．
                                Besides
I hate being treated like a bird kept in a cage．To get more freedom，I will try to persuade him．
                                                                                                                                    them
1．that改为which．非限制性定语从句不能用that引导．
2．had改为have．文章表达的是现在的情况，要用现在时态．句意表达的是从过去到现在，要用现在完成时态．
3．at改为to．短语搭配，look forward to盼望．
4．movie改为movies．题干用several修饰，名词要用复数．
5．the去掉．球类运动之前不用冠词．
6．different改为differently．修饰动词think要用副词．
7．加to．短语搭配，want sb to do sth想要某人做某事．
8．fallen改为fall．题干是用or连接三个动作be knocked，fall和fight with，都是在情态动词will后，所以要用动词原形．
9．Therefore改为Besides．句意表达的是递进关系，除此以外，不是因果关系．
10．him改为them．逻辑指代错误，题干指代的是parents，要用指代复数的them．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．