题目内容
3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\） 划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My grandfather and me enjoy fishing．
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake．We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake．As soon as we arrived，so we dropped the lines into the water．Before waiting for half an hour，I was beginning to get impatiently．I wanted to give up，and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer．Finally，there came a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught．Within the next few minute，my grandfather also caught a fish．
Feeling hungry，we built a fire by the lake over which we cooked the fish．It was tasted good．
分析 作者在本文讲述了自己和爷爷一次钓鱼的经历，起初作者缺乏耐心，后来在爷爷的鼓励下终于钓到了一条鱼，随后爷爷也钓到了鱼．
解答 My grandfather and me enjoy fishing．
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake．We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake．As soon as we arrived，so we dropped the lines into the water．Before waiting for half an hour，I was beginning to get impatiently．I wanted to give up，and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer．Finally，there came a sudden pull at the pole and∧fish was caught．Within the next few minute，my grandfather also caught a fish．
Feeling hungry，we built a fire by the lake over which we cooked the fish．It was tasted good
详解：
1．me改为I；考查人称代词，此处用主格形式I与My grandfather并列做句子的主语．
2．go改为went；考查动词的时态，本文讲述过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时went．
3．ours改为our；考查物主代词，名词 fishing poles 前面要用形容词性物主代词our．
4．删掉so；考查句子结构，so引导结果状语从句，分析句意可知此处不表示结果，故把so去掉．
5．Before改为After；考查介词，结合上下文分析句意为"等了半个小时以后…"，故用after．
6．impatiently改为impatient；考查形容词，这里get用作系动词，后面跟形容词形式impatient作表语．
7．and改为but；考查连词，分析句意可知上下文之间为转折关系，故用but，意为"我想放弃，但是爷爷告诉我再等一会"．
8．fish前面加a；考查主谓一致，根据句子的动词was可知此处是单数形式，故在fish前面加a表示"一条"
9．minute改为minutes；考查名词，few后面跟可数名词的复数形式，故用minutes．
10．删掉was；考查动词的语态，tasted此处是系动词，意为"尝起来"，在句中直接作谓语，故把was去掉．
点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文，了解短文基本大意，确定文章的基本时态，再运用语法，词汇，习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子，找出文中的错误加以修改
