Question

2．假如你是李华．请你给校报编辑写一封建议信．内容如下：
1．春节是中国最重要的传统节日．在七天的假期中，亲朋好友喜欢欢聚一堂，吃吃喝喝，开心地玩乐．
2．问题：有些人过度饮食，增重不少；有些人整日整夜玩游戏、玩纸牌．
3．建议：保持平衡的饮食，有益于健康；选择户外运动或全家旅游，过一个健康有意义的春节．
Dear editor，
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China．
         ．
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
句型一：
people should keep a balanced diet and try to avoid rich food and overeating during the festival，which is of great benefit to their health．使用which引导的非限制性定语从句，表示"人们应该保持饮食平衡，避免油腻食物和暴饮暴食，这对他们的健康有好处．"
句型二：
Why not go out with the families and friends，such as，taking a walk in the mountains，to breathe fresh air and admire the scenery as well？为什么不和家人朋友出去呢？例如：在山中散步，去呼吸新鲜空气和欣赏风景？why not do…为什么不做…

解答 Dear editor，
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China．During the seven-day holiday，all the families and friends love to get together to eat，drink and have fun with each other．（要点一）
But at the same time，some people will eat and drink too much．It's easy for them to put on weight．Some people spend most of the time sitting still，playing games and card games day and night．（要点二）
To have a healthy and meaningful Festival，I suggest that，for one thing，people should keep a balanced diet and try to avoid rich food and overeating during the festival，which is of great benefit to their health．【高分句型一】Why not go out with the families and friends，such as，taking a walk in the mountains，to breathe fresh air and admire the scenery as well？【高分句型二】Doing outdoor activities is a good way to help you relax both mentally and physically．I bet that people will get refreshment afterwards．There are many other choices，too．Family tour is the one if you like．（要点三）
I hope you find my advice useful and have a happy，healthy and meaningful Spring Festival
                                                                  Your sincerely，
                                                                   Li Hua

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