题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华,你在网上看到你所在的城市的一个英语培训中心招生暑期助教,请根据以下要点写一封英语申请信,内容包括
1. 申请原因;
2. 自我优势(口语能力,组织能力,沟通能力);
3. 希望获准。
注意:1. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:助教 teaching assistant
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m glad to see your advertisement on the Internet. I ‘m willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer,I’m writing to apply for the position.
In order to gain some valuable working experience,I want to seize this opportunity to improve myself.Devoted to learning English for years,I think I’m equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English.Besides,being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer,which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently.Most importantly,many of my teachers describe me as “responsible and diligent”,and I believe these good qualities contribute to cooperating well in a team.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是写一封英语申请书。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容(1. 春节在人们心中的地位;2. 春节前,人们做的事;3. 春节后人们做的事。)进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写信的格式。
【亮点说明】本文按照提纲要求,层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如In order to gain some valuable working experience,I want to seize this opportunity to improve myself.定语从句being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer,which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently.常用句型表达Looking forward to your early reply.及短语be equal to,besides,most importantly等。