Question

【题目】假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Not only do our parents give life, but also gave us endless love and support. I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so many love and spare no effort to support me. Once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost were kept me company the whole night. Now I’m in Senior 3. Luckily for myself, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraged words. However, they give me enough personal space, that I appreciate so much. What I should do now is to study hardly. When I grow up, I will try my best make my parents live the very happy life.

Answer 1

【答案】1. gave→give

2. many→much

3. 去掉were

4. myself→me

5. encouraged→encouraging

6. However→Furthermore

7. that→which

8. hardly→hard

9. try后加to

10. the→a

【解析】1. 句意：我们的父母不仅给我们生命，而且给我们无尽的爱和支持。表示客观事实用一般现在时态，故把gave改为give。

2. love是不可数名词，故把many改为much。

3. 句意：他们担忧，整夜陪伴我。根据句意可知是主动语态，故把were去掉。

4. 句意：对我来说很幸运。故把myself改为me。

5.表示“令人受鼓舞的话”。故把encouraged改为encouraging。

6. “他们给我足够的私人空间”是对前面内容的进一步说明，不是转折关系，故把However改为Furthermore。

7. 此处是整个句子作先行词，后面用which引导非限制性定语从句，故把that改为which。

8. “努力学习”用work hard。hard表示“几乎不”，故把hardly改为hard。

9. 固定搭配：try one’s best to do sth.“尽最大努力做某事”，故在try my best后加to。

10. 固定结构：live a+adj.+life过着……的生活。故把the改为a。