题目内容
【题目】请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。
假如你是李华，随着共享单车逐渐进人海外市场，你的英国笔友Tom对此非常感兴趣。请你写封邮件向他介绍共享单车。邮件的内容包括以下几点：
1. 共享单车的使用方法(扫二维码，解锁骑车）；
2. 共享单车的便利之处；
3. 询问他共享单车在英国的情况。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：共享单车shared bikes；二维码the QR code
Dear Tom,
I am more than delighted to know you show great interest in shared bikes
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I am more than delighted to know you show great interest in shared bikes which have received increasing attention at home and abroad. It is my pleasure to introduce them to you.
When you spot a shared bike, what you need to do is just scan the QR code of the bike to unlock it and enjoy your trip. Not only are the shared bikes environmentally friendly and convenient, but also they charge low rates and can be parked almost anytime and anywhere, which have given them advantages over other means of public transport.
With the shared bikes entering the UK, I can’t help but wonder about their situation there. Could you please be kind enough to tell me something about that?
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】假如你是李华，随着共享单车逐渐进人海外市场，你的英国笔友Tom对此非常感兴趣。请你写封邮件向他介绍共享单车。邮件的内容包括以下几点：1. 共享单车的使用方法(扫二维码，解锁骑车）；2. 共享单车的便利之处；3. 询问他共享单车在英国的情况。
本文为说明文。文章所给的内容比较具体，只要稍加展开即可。时态用一般现在时即可。写作时尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式。
亮点本文内容完整，要点齐全。文章中使用了一些较高级词汇如：more than（非常），show great interest in…(对….感兴趣)，give sb advantages over , can’t help but do.., be …enough to do…等，使文章丰富多彩。句式复杂多样，既有复杂句，又有简单句。复合句运用的很灵活：既有名词从句、并列句和倒装句式。又运用了非谓语。这使得文章跌宕起伏，提高了文章的档次。
第一段运用了定语从句（which have received increasing attention at home and abroad）和常用句式：It is my pleasure to introduce them to you，简洁明了。
第二段由两个复杂句说明了文章的前两个点：共享单车的使用方法和共享单车的便利之处。复杂句（When you spot a shared bike, what you need to do is just scan the QR code of the bike to unlock it and enjoy your trip）中包括一个由when引导的状语从句和由what引导的名词从句。复杂句（Not only are the shared bikes environmentally friendly and convenient, but also they charge low rates and can be parked almost anytime and anywhere, which have given them advantages over other means of public transport）中包含由not only…but aslo…引导的倒装句，一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句。本段观点言简意赅，本段中句式也最为复杂。
最后一段在询问他共享单车在英国的情况时，运用一个由with引导的非谓语（With the shared bikes entering the UK）作状语和一般疑问句完成了文章的第三个内容，语言贴切，紧凑。
