假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

When I was 8 ,I caught a disease naming ADD. which led to me having trouble concentrating. I don't realize how bad it was until early middle school. I noticed I couldn’t focus in my lessons. Obviously,I fell farther behind in my studies. One of my classmate even told me I would never get out of high school. I told me the only thing I could do was try as hard as possible. With the help of my teachers try as hard as possible. With the help of my teachers and classmates,T ve made a great progress and becoming a top student. I am a senior this year and ready to graduate from high school. I’m writing this story tell people you can be great at anything unless you work hard.

1. . .. disease naming ADD ... naming →named

2. 1 don't realize ... don't→didn’ t

3. . .. focus in my lessons. in→on

4. . .. fell farther behind ... farther→far

5. One of my classmate ... classmate→classmates

6. 1 told me ... me→myself

7. . .. made a great progress ... 去掉 a

8. . .. becoming a top student, becoming→become

9. . .. this story tell people ... tell 前加 to

10.. ..unless you work hard unless→if

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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

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注意：

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Dear friends,

Thanks.

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