Question

假设你是李华，你们班就“中学生是否能在校园里使用手机”为题开展了一次班会，请你将班会的讨论结果给21st Century报编辑写的一封信，并附上你的观点。

支持者	反对者
便于与亲友联系	玩手机游戏，看电影等影响学习
可上网查找信息	贵重物品容易丢失
……	……
你的观点？

要求：1.不能出现真实学校和姓名 2. 不少于100词

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to tell you ____________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________

Best wishes, Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether mobile phones should be brought to school. There are two different opinions on the question.

Sixty percent of the students think students can bring a mobile phone to school. It is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends. On the other hand, he can also search for some important information on the Internet by the phone. Besides, it’s fashionable to have a mobile phone.

However, 40 percent of the students are against the view. In their opinion, with mobile phones, some students may have a chat on the Internet and spend much time playing games, which has a bad effect on their study and health. What’s more, one mobile phone may cost much money and it’s likely to be lost in the school.

As far as I’m concerned, students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones. In a word, I don’t think it’s a good idea to bring mobile phones to school,

Best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

 

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文，要点已经以表格的形式给出。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。我们所要做的就是按要点内容给21st Century报编辑写的一封信。话题是关于“中学生是否能在校园里使用手机”的不同的观点，注意题目的要求，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要把表格中的要点都写出来，不要有遗漏。在表达自己的观点的时候，要充分发挥想象力，写作时尽量使用自己不会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮点说明】文章中表达的时候使用了词组和句型：In their opinion在他们看来, As far as I’m concerned据我所知, In a word总之, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether mobile phones should be brought to school. 这句话用了宾语从句，It is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends. 这句话用了it做形式主语和定语从句，with mobile phones, some students may have a chat on the Internet and spend much time playing games, which has a bad effect on their study and health. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句， it’s likely to be lost in the school.这句话用了固定句型， there is no need for us to use mobile phones. 使用了固定句型，I don’t think it’s a good idea to bring mobile phones to school,这句话用了否定前移。还有范文还使用了：On the other hand, Besides, What’s more,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查书信类书面表达