题目内容
【题目】某英文报社组织了一次有关“健康生活方式”的英语征文活动,你有意参加。对于这两种谚语:“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”和“An hour walking a day keeps the doctor away.”,你更倾向于哪个,是饮食更重要,还是锻炼更重要,抑或是饮食锻炼都重要。请根据自己的生活体验,表明自己的观点并简要陈述自己的理由。注意:1.词数:120-150; 2.题目自拟; 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:谚语proverb
【答案】Exercise and Food are both Important to us
Nowadays more and more people notice that healthy life style is very important. But some people believe that healthy food and drink is more necessary than ever, just like the old proverb: An apple a day keeps the doctor away.However, other people believe that exercise is a healthy lifestyle, just like what they say: An hour walking a day keeps the doctor away.
I think healthy living habits are very important for us. In current society, people have known the importance of keeping healthy and good life habit. Healthy living style includes two sides: we should eat plenty of fruits and meat or vegetables and drink lots of fresh water, besides doing exercises is essential. It brings us health as well as relaxation and pleasure.In short, healthy living habits bring many benefits, although sometimes you even do not realize. Remember:Food and exercise are both important to us.
【解析】试题分析:本文属于命题作文,考生首先要审清楚题,然后再根据这一中心思想在做详细讨论。本文的话题是对生活中是饮食更重要,还是锻炼更重要,抑或是饮食锻炼都重要进行的说明,属于议论文,所以使用一般现在时的时态和第三人称,在发表个人观点的时候使用第一人称。在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in short总之;as well as 和,也;just like what they say这个句子中what引导的宾语从句