Question

【题目】假如你是李华，目前正在一所外国语学校读高中。最近一段时间你对美国文化比较关注，尤其对美国的节日感兴趣。请你给你的美国网友Tom写一封电子邮件，询问关于感恩节的一些情况。内容要点如下：

1.介绍自己的近况；

2.询问关于感恩节的一些情况（起源、时间、庆祝方式等）；

3.表示感谢。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

Thanks for your e-mail last time.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

Thanks for your e-mail last time. I’d like to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American culture, especially American festivals.

When it comes to American festivals, what attracts me most is Thanksgiving Day. Since I have never spent the festival in America in person, I know little about it. I would appreciate it greatly if you could tell me something about it. My questions are as follows: How did it come into being? How and when do people celebrate it? What’s its significance?

I hope you can give me assistance in this problem and thank you in advance.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，假如你是李华，目前正在一所外国语学校读高中。最近一段时间你对美国文化比较关注，尤其对美国的节日感兴趣。请你给你的美国网友Tom写一封电子邮件，询问关于感恩节的一些情况。内容要点如下：1.介绍自己的近况；2.询问关于感恩节的一些情况（起源、时间、庆祝方式等）；3.表示感谢。其次要确定时态，描述主语的近况，用一般现在时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如I’d like to tell you that I am now focusing my attention on American culture, especially American festivals.

这里含有一个宾语从句。When it comes to American festivals, what attracts me most is Thanksgiving Day. 这里含有一个主语从句。I hope you can give me assistance in this problem and thank you in advance. 这里含有一个宾语从句。