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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错误的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir,
Having read about your newspaper's decision to start a campaign for protecting the environment, I decide to write you this letter.
The state of our park is very shocked, with rubbish everywhere. I was used to find a trip to the park very relaxing. Upon the arrival of spring, beautiful birds would sing happy in the park. I enjoyed this very much. Therefore, now I just find it tiring, because I have to pick up rubbish where I am going to sit. The grass is covered on plastic bags and food. I am sad that the young people of today do not clean up after themselves before he leave the park. There are so much interesting animals and insects living in our parks. It would be shame if they were destroyed because of people's activity there.
Yours
Wang Qiang

Answer 1

【答案】①decide→decided； ②shocked→shocking； ③去掉was； ④happy→happily ； ⑤Therefore→However； ⑥on→in/with ； ⑦he→they ； ⑧much→many ； ⑨∧a shame； ⑩activity→activities

【解析】本文是一篇应用文，Wang Qiang介绍了公园的现状。
①考查时态。句意：我决定给你写这封信。根据句意可知句子用一般过去时态，故把.decide改为 decided。
②考查形容词。句意：公园的状态是令人震惊的，到处都是垃圾。shocking“令人震惊的”；shocked“感到震惊的”，故把shocked改为 shocking。
③考查固定短语。句意：我过去觉得公园是令人放松的。used to固定短语，“过去常常”，故把句中was去掉。
④考查副词。副词修饰动词，故把happy改为happily。
⑤考查副词。句意：以前觉得公园是美的，非常喜欢。然而，现在觉得它是非常无聊的。此处表示转折关系，故把Therefore改为However。
⑥考查介词。句意：草被塑料袋和食物覆盖着。be covered in/with固定短语，“用......覆盖”，故把on改为 in/with。

⑦考查动词。句意：今天的年轻人在他们离开之前不会自我清理。故把he改为 they。

⑧考查代词。animals是可数名词复数，用many修饰，故把much改为many。
⑨考查冠词。句意：这将是一件羞愧的事。故在shame前加a。

⑩考查名词。句意：如果他们因为人们的活动而被摧毁，那将是一件可耻的事。此处应该用名词的复数形式，故把activity改为activities。