题目内容
12.你接受了校报的邀请,为其用英语写一篇人物介绍.[写作内容]
请根据以下表格的信息,介绍一位名人.
| 姓名 | 管谟业 |
| 笔名 | 莫言 |
| 职业 | 作家 |
| 代表作品 | 《红高粱家族》《酒国》《生死疲劳》等 |
| 主要奖项 | 2012年诺贝尔文学奖 |
| 诺贝尔奖评委的观点 | 莫言的作品将虚幻现实主义与民间故事、历史与当代社会融合在一起 |
| 莫言本人对获奖的看法 | 1、获奖理由: 1)作品中的文学素质打动了诺奖评委; 2)作品展现了中国独特的文化和风情; 3)站在了人性的角度,超越了地区和种族的局限; 2、回应质疑: 感谢质疑他的人,让他进一步了解了自己的优点和缺陷. |
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯.
分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息讨论用英语写一篇人物介绍,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:分别从姓名,职业,代表作品,诺贝尔奖评委的观点,莫言本人对获奖的看法等方面介绍莫言 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:the contemporary society当代社会;Besides另外;the perspective of humanism人性的角度;On the other hand另一方面;in terms of关于;expressed his gratitude 表达感激之情;strengths and weaknesses长处和短处
解答 Mo Yan,whose real name is Guan Moye,is a writer with many famous novels,the best of which include Red Sorghum Clan,The Republic of Wine and Life and Death Are Wearing Me Out and so on.(高分句型)Mo Yan has been awarded the 2012 Nobel Prize for Literature by the Nobel Prize Committee who think that the works by Mo Yan have merged hallucinatory realism with folk tales,and history with the contemporary society.(高分句型)In Mo Yan's opinion,he has been granted this honor for the following reasons,the first being that the literary quality of his works has impressed the members of the Nobel Prize Committee.Besides,his works present the unique cultures and customs of China to the world,and at the same time he has written his novels from the perspective of humanism,which has gone beyond the limit of countries and races.(高分句型)On the other hand,in terms of the view held by some people that he does not deserve the prize,he has expressed his gratitude to them,as they remind him of his strengths and weaknesses.(高分句型)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
People watching TV advertisements would notice that there has always been an advertisement war between the marketers of different consumer goods.A few such cases are given below.
1.Parachute Coconut Oil vs.V.V.D.Gold
Some time back,the producer of V.V.D Gold Coconut Oil claimed in their TV advertisement that only their products was superior and the one sold in blue colour bottles (the reference was to Parachute coconut oil) was suitable only for un-natural hair.
2.Tata Salt vs.Captain Cook
Tata salt was first iodised (碘处理) salt marketed by an Indian Company.It has been enjoying a good and steady market.Captain Cook,another producer of iodised salt,who entered the market later,had to adopt some strategy to get control of the market.The TV advertisement of Captain Cook stressed on‘Free flow'of their salt when transferred to a container.The producer of Tata Salt retaliated (报复) by saying that the claim of Captain Cook was a trick and those who were quality conscious should deal with it with caution.
3.Pepsi vs.Coco Cola
Coca Cola was selected as the official soft drink for the Wills World Cricket 1996.When the cricket series was on,the marketers of Pepsi constantly advertised on TV.Their advertisement gave the idea that the cricketers preferred only Pepsi and as a matter of fact there was nothing official about it.
4.Horlicks vs.Complan
Sometime back,the TV advertisement of Complan,a health drink directly attacked Horlicks,which has been in the market for several decades.The claim of Complan was that their brand (which according to them was Brand C) has a higher percentage of ingredients (材料) compared to Brand H (reference was nothing but to Horlicks).
The above examples clearly show how the technique of advertisement is misused by some marketers to ruin the image of their competitors.This,certainly,is not a healthy trend.
Any marketer should only speak about his products and not about his competitors'products.The awareness of consumers has certainly increased over the years and they are no longer easily taken in.There are many consumer products like salt,oil shaving blades etc.But one thing for sure is that offering the same product in a different container will not make the product different.
Mass media like Radio,Television and newspaper should not allow advertisements that tell lies.Legal regulations,in this regard,should also be made stricter.
| Comparison of the past and the present | ||
| In the past | At present | |
| A technique mainly used for offering (66) information | A trick used as a means of unfair (67) competition | |
| Unhealthy trend of the (68) misuse of advertisement | ||
| (69) Cases/Examples given | Products | Wrong (70) practice(s) |
| V.V.D.Gold | l No product of the kind could (71) match it. | |
| Captain Cook | l Captain Cook stressed on their"free flow"when their product was put into a container. | |
| Tata Salt | l Tata salt warned consumers to be (72) cautious/careful. | |
| Pepsi | l Too much advertisement on TV seemed to say that Pepsi was the cricketers'(73) favorite. | |
| Complan | l Complan claimed that their product was much (74) richer in ingredients. | |
| Solutions | Only (75) qualityof products is allowed to be mentioned in the advertisement.Stricter laws should be made to protect every producers'and consumers'benefits. | |
These two special days are celebrated in many different ways.On Mother's Day people wear carnations.A.red one stands for a living mother.A.white one shows that the mother is dead.Many people attend religious services(宗教仪式)to honor parents.It is also a day when people whose parents are dead visit their graves(坟).On these days,families get together at home and in restaurants.They often have outdoor BBQs for Father's Day.These are days of fun and good feelings and memories.
Another tradition is to give cards and gifts.Children make them in school.Many people make their own presents.These are valued more than the ones bought in stores.It is not the value of the gift that is important,but it is"the thought that counts".Greeting card stores,florists,candy makers,bakeries,telephones companies and other stores do a lot of business during these holidays.
(71)Two special days
| Types | ●Mother's Day ●(72)Father's Day |
| (73)Aim/Purpose | to show love and respect for parents. |
| Common points | offer a chance to think about (74)the changing roles |
(75)ways of celebrating | ●wearing carnations on Mother's Day. ●(76)attendingreligious services to honor parents. ●(77)visitingparents'graves ●(78)getting togetherat home and in restaurant. ●(79)having outdoor BBQs |
| (80)Tradition | Giving cards and gifts to parents. |
| 报纸名称及使用语言 | 21st Century 英文报纸 |
| 出版地点及出版周期 | 北京 每周一期 |
| 版面内容 | 每周新闻、今日世界、语言课堂,体育与音乐、学生报导 |
| 特色 | 图文并茂 |
| 目的 | 学习英语词汇,提高英语水平,获取各种信息 |
| 效果 | 广为人知,深受喜爱 |
| A. | one | B. | who | C. | the one | D. | that |
-That's right.__________.( )
| A. | Something is better than nothing | |
| B. | Many hands make light work | |
| C. | The more,the happier | |
| D. | The sooner begun,the sooner done |