题目内容
随着科技的进步,多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时,有些学校利用它来播放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文,陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议 。(字数 120 词左右,不计开头 )
| 大多数同学认为 | 部分同学认为 | 个人看法 |
| 能活跃气氛 ; 能使大脑得到放松,减轻学习的疲劳,使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备 ; 能给大家带来快乐 | 课间时间太短 ,播放音乐达不到预期的效果; 课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音 。 | 考生陈述 |
Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not.___________________________________________________________________________
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Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not .The opinions are divided .
Most of the students think that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides , after hard study , music can bring us relaxation , which reduces the tiredness. This can help us make full preparations for the next class. Listening to music also makes us feel happy . On the other hand , some students don’t think so. In their opinion , they can’t get the expected effect from playing music , for the class break time is too short .What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music .
In my opinion , it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break. In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest. Besides, I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.
解析试题分析:本文的写作遵循议论文的“三段式”进行,首先对一些学生的观点进行陈述,能活跃气氛 music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere.;能使大脑得到放松,减轻学习的疲劳,使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备 This can help us make full preparations for the next class;能给大家带来快乐Listening to music also makes us feel happy .然后,对另一些人的观点进行陈述,课间时间太短 ,播放音乐达不到预期的效果they can’t get the expected effect from playing music , 课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音instead of noise produced by music.最后,对自己的观点进行表达,可以表示自己支持播放轻音乐,因为轻音乐既能够使学生欣赏又能够得到休息,同时也可以表达应该建议学校播放适合学生的励志歌曲等。
考点:提纲类写作
点评:提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体,比较好写。学生在写作的过程中,首先思路要清晰,要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来,遇到不会的要学会替换所用语,来达到同样的意思。在每一篇作文中,对于表达观点的句子,都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感,适当运用俗语,如when it comes to当谈到,运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化,表达地道得体。
随着科技的进步,多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时,有些学校利用它来播放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文,陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议 。(字数 120 词左右,不计开头 )
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大多数同学认为 |
部分同学认为 |
个人看法 |
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能活跃气氛 ; 能使大脑得到放松,减轻学习的疲劳,使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备 ; 能给大家带来快乐 |
课间时间太短 ,播放音乐达不到预期的效果; 课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音 。 |
考生陈述 |
Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not._______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________