Question

15．你校高三年级近期将举办"Keys to my success"的主题演讲活动，请你根据自己的高三学习体验，结合以下内容要点写一篇英语演讲稿．
要点：1．谈谈决定成功的因素 （如：态度、方法、心态…）； 2．说说自己的做法及体会．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear friends，
I feel greatly honored to give a speech here．My topic is"Keys to my success"．
                                                          
Thanks for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
"No pains，no gains"serves as my motto，which continuously pushes me ahead．
我的座右铭是"不劳者无获"，这一直激励着我不断向前．
高分句型二：
Whenever I have difficulties，I will surely turn to teachers．
无论何时我遇到困难，我都会向老师咨询．
句型一 No pains，no gains 使用了一个格言，使得文章更具说服力，which continuously pushes me ahead 这是一个由which 充当关系代词，且在句中作主语的非限制性定语从句．
句型二 Whenever I have difficulties 该句是一个whenever引导的让步状语从句
句型一和二的使用，使得整篇文章在表述时更具亮点．

解答 Dear friends，
        I feel greatly honored to give a speech here．My topice is"Keys to my success"．
       We are all eager for success．But how can we achieve this？To me，attitude，method and state of mind are the key elements．
  Attitude counts．As a senior 3 student，I attach great importance to study，and work diligently to get myself well prepared，though sometimes I feel exhausted and stressed．"No pains，no gains"serves as my motto，which continuously pushes me ahead．（高分句型二）Secondly，I value scientific and effective method．I'd listen attentively and get actively involved in warious interactions in class．After class，I enjoy thinking to myself．Whenever I have difficulties，I will surely turn to teachers．（高分句型二）Finally，a good state of mind has been accompanying me all the way．
     Different people may have different ideas．Try to find what suits you best!
     Thanks for your listening!

点评 本书面表达为提纲类作文，该类型的书面表达要求要点明确，且规定了考生的表述思路，要将所列要点全部涉及，不能遗漏，观点表达要力求语言简洁，准确．