题目内容
【题目】假设你是高二学生李华,你的表弟王林即将要上高中。请你给他写一封邮件告诉他如何尽快地适用高中生活以及如何与新同学相处融洽等。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头以为你拟好,不计入总词数。
Dear Wang lin,
I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September.
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【答案】Dear Wang lin,
I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September. As a senior 2 student , I have so much experience to share with you. High school life is full of challenges. Making good use of your tme will be of great benefit to efficient study. It is also helpful to preview your lessons before class and take notes in class. High school life can be very colorful as well. I suggest you participate in some meaningful activities , such as sports and voluntary work to develop yourself properly and thoroughly .At the same time, I hope that you will get on well with your classmates and help each other. The coming three years will be the most beautiful time in your life. I believe that with your efforts , you’ll make it fruitful and wonderful.
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一篇电子邮件:假设你是高二学生李华,你的表弟王林即将要上高中。请你给他写一封邮件告诉他如何尽快地适用高中生活以及如何与新同学相处融洽等。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:a senior high school student(一名高中生);High school life is full of challenges(高中生活充满了挑战);take notes in class(上课记笔记);participate in some meaningful activities(参加一些有意义的活动)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。