假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧) .并在其下面写出该加的词. .删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ ) 划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 .

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ ) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

My younger sister asked me that I could lend her 20 dollar yesterday afternoon. I refused because I was saving money for the beautiful dress. Yesterday evening,I found the $20 bill I have put on my desk gone. I immediate thought my sister had taken it. So I ran to her room and asked her to return back my money in anger. But she said she hadn^，t taken them. Just then,my mother came in. When she knew what had happened,she said, ^“Your sister didn't take it. I took it because I need some money this afternoon.^” I apologized my sister and decided to stay calmly from then on.

31. ... asked me that... that → if / whether

32. . .. her 20 dollar ... dollar → dollars

33. . .. the beautiful dress, the → a

34. . .. I have put... have → had

35. 1 immediate thought... immediate → immediately

36. . .. to return back ... 去掉back

37. . .. hadn* t taken them, them → it

38. . .. because I need ... need → needed

39. 1 apologized my ... apologized后加to

40. ... to stay calmly ... calmly → calm

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During the past year,I experienced a setback ) concerning my horse,Princeton. I came to know Princeton when,as a result of my. development as a(n) 21,it became appropriate for me to advance to a horse that was (有能力的) of jumping higher than my current horse. After 22 a variety of horses,I became 23 that I couldn’t find a new teammate. Then I 24 Princeton. I knew as soon as I saw him that he was the horse for me. And as soon as I looked into his nervous eyes I felt 25 him.

Some of my happiest hours were spent with Princeton. I wouldn^，t 26 anything for the moments I spent with this horse. I spent most of my time 27 him. I rode Princeton daily for 3 years,and in at least 24 horse shows. We came to know and respect each other,and 28 I gained his trust and the 29 look in his eyes went away. Princeton wasn't just a horse to me; he became my 30 and my teammate. Together we achieved 31 in almost every horse show. We won a lot of prizes. Princeton didn't just help my 32 as a rider,he helped me become more responsible.

33,things have a way of changing. In October 2014,it became apparent to me that Princeton wasn't capable of 34 enough to keep up with the improvement of my riding skills. This was really 35 for me to deal with. I 36 the alternatives which included continuing riding Princeton, leasing(出租) him out to other riders or selling him. But none of them seemed 37 . My heart felt like it was 38 when I realized it was time to sell this horse.

39,the local insurance agent agreed to find a retirement home for Princeton. Today,Princeton is 40 on a farm in Indiana. A girl takes care of him every day just like I used to.

21. A. instructor B. journalist C. student D. rider

22. A. losing B. saving C. trying D. feeding

23. A. proud B. discouraged A. puzzled D. surprised

24. A. protected B. heard C. met D. admired

25. A. attached to B. curious about

C. anxious about D. accustomed to

26. A. prepare B. trade C. provide D. display

27. A. taking care of B. making use of

C. putting up with D. catching up with

28. A. occasionally B. slowly C. easily D. nearly

29. A. disappointed B. shocked C. angry D. nervous

30. A. judge B. supporter C. friend D. guide

31. A. progress B. peace C. balance D. success

32. A. health B. state C. skills D. dreams

33. A. Moreover B. Otherwise C. Therefore D. However

34. A. walking B. developing C. eating D. jumping

35. A. hard B. late C. fun D. suitable

36. A. forgot B. accepted C. considered D. doubted

37. A. familiar B. important C. clear D. right

38. A. breaking B. beating C. recovering D. falling

39. A. Frequently B. Fortunately C. Strangely D. Naturally

40. A. retired B. cured C. trained D. lonely

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

I've been dreaming of becoming the astronaut since I was little. In order to make my dreams come true,I ate healthily and often exercise. Though many people thought I was daydreaming,but I always believed that I'd realize my dream one day. One day I found Mars One on accident online. It is a project that aims at sending some astronauts to Mars. I immediate applied for it. Thousand of people applied,but only about one thousand were choosing for round two. I was one of them. Now I'm still waiting the final result. Whether I’11 be picked or not,we won’t give up my dream.

The daily hard work in the office can be extremely exhausting. Staring at a computer screen for eight hours a day seems like modem business practice. It's also a common belief that you 5 re more likely to complete your "tasks if you keep your bottom planted in your chair all day. But that opinion is erroneous. In fact,taking breaks regularly throughout your workday can increase your productivity and creativity as it helps to keep the mental iuices flowing. ,

A new study in the journal Cognition overturns an old theory about the nature of attention and shows that brief breaks from a task can greatly improve one's ability to focus on that task for a longer period of time. The study gets to the most important part of what so many of us experience when doing the same task for a long period of time; after a while you begin to lose your focus and your ability to perform the task well. "Basically,if you don 51 take small breaks during the day,you re likely to suffer from exhaustion and won 51 complete your task to the highest level of your ability,” says Alejandro Lleras,the leader of the study.

In addition,new research shows that your brain can be trained and developed iike a muscle. Mental concentration is part of that training. Just as your muscles become tired after a workout,so does your brain. It needs a rest to recover and move on.

So,what can you do if you feel guilty about taking a break during the workday? Remember that taking breaks is a good,necessary thing. We* re trying to prove ourselves and our worth to the company,which makes us think that taking breaks prevents us from achieving our goals,but in fact it's not. It's necessary to do your best work.

5. What does the underlined word a “erroneous” in Paragraph 1 mean?

A. Incorrect. B. Interesting.

C. Important. D. Strange.

6. The study by Alejandro Lleras shows that people.

A. always lose their focus during the workday

B. find it hard to reach the highest level of their ability

C. often feel competitive when performing a task well

D. become less productive after working non-stop for long periods

7. The third paragraph is mainly developed .

A. by order in space B. by cause and effect

C. by time and events D. by making a comparison

8. In the author's opinion,people should .

A. take breaks at work

B. try to achieve their goals

C. train their brains frequently

D. prove themselves to the company

Prashant Mandal shares a small house with his wife and four kids,and survives on less than $2 a day. Yet,despite Mandal' s modest income,he spends 20 percent of his income on solar energy,an expenditure (支出) which he says is key to helping his children to study.

Across the globe,about 1. 2 billion people live without electricity. Such limitations are not only inconvenient,but also put people in low-income countries at greater risk of having serious health conditions. People living without electricity typically rely on kerosene lamps,and other harmful light sources,which can lead to bums,injuries,poisoning and other risks.

Realizing the need for a more efficient energy source,a lot of companies have developed business models that enable poor people to purchase solar energy.

SimpaNetworks,which focuses its efforts on rural India,is one such company that's found a way to make solar energy affordable and accessible to people in need. Customers are charged a small down payment for a high-quality solar system. Then,through its “progressive purchase^ model,they pay in advance for a designated (指定的) amount of energy consumption. Each payment counts toward the final purchase price.

A number of other companies have found ways to get solar energy into the hands,anci homes of people who typically can’t afford electricity. MPOWER D. a New ork-based company,invented an (充气式的) solar light in 2012 that is powered by the sun,and is also able to store solar energy.

“Energy poverty is solvable if we all work together,” says John Salzinger,MPOWERD’s co-founder. “Every single consumer purchase helps us reduce costs,and then we pass those savings on to those who need affordable light most. We automatically enable our customers to help others,while helping the environment,by simply making a purchase."

Why does the author mention Prashant Mandal in Paragraph 1 ?

A. To show that electricity is precioub.

B. To bring up the topic of the text.

C. To introduce his poor family.

D. To tell an interesting story.

2. What can we infer from Paragraph 2 ?

A. Kerosene lamps are healthy light sources.

B. There are few people living without electricity.

C. Poor countries are at greater risk of spreading .

diseases.

D. People living without electricity may face serious risks.

3. Paragraph 4 mainly tells us .

A. how customers pay for SimpaNetworks solar

B. how impaNetworks invented the inflatable solar

C. how customers use electricity in rural India

D. how solar system works in rural India

4. How does John Salzinger feel about energy poverty?

A. Uncaring. B. Surprising.

C. Disappointed. D. Optimistic.

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When 6-year-old Semra Aniston Young was asked to write about something she liked about herself,she responded with a simple but powerful message about her body image.

Semra's mom Kali Young said that she and her husband first saw the completed assignment at a parent-teacher conference. aHer teacher loved it and was excited to share it with us,” she said. After admiring the details in the drawing,Kali said she and her husband considered the (潜在的) meaning. “We discussed how happy we were that she saw herself as beautiful and that she loved her body,” the mom said. “We were so thankful that our daughter saw herself in a positive way.”

Kali,who works as an assistant headmaster at an elementary school,said she encourages her daughter to notice the positive aspects of people she sees and meets. “In a time when negatives seem to be flooding our society,I want my daughter to feel the positive and see the positive in herself and others/' she said,adding that she and her husband emphasize the importance of inner beauty qualities such as kindness and compassion

“When it comes to outer beauty,we point out what a beautiful shirt someone is wearing,or praise a beautiful hair color or fine skin,” the mom continued, “My hope is that she can see that inner beauty is the most important and that outward beauty is represented in many different ways. I want my daughter to see herself as a beautiful,confident,young lady — inside and outside. And seeing her positive self-image through her drawing makes me so proud."

As an educator,Kali is highly aware of the pressure and mixed messages about body images that girls experience as they grow up. And she's determined to help Semra develop confidence and have compassion from a young age.

5. How did Semra respond to the assignment?

A. She praised her teacher.

B. She sang a beautiful song.

C. She showed little interest in it.

D. She drew a joyful picture of herself.

6. What does the underlined word in Paragraph 2 refer to?

A. The parents ’ reaction.

B. The teacher's assignment.

C. The parent-teacher conference.

D. Semra's completed assignment.

7. How did Kali feel after seeing Semra’s work?

A. Confused. B. Happy.

C. Shocked. D. Worried.

8. In Kali Young ’s opinion,.

A. Semra lacks compassion for others

B. it is necessay to praise Semra often

C. inner beauty is more important than outward

D. Semra pays too much attention to her appearance

2. People are grateful because their food is gathered for the winter and the agricultural work is over. (P2)

[分析]

①本句是一个主从复合句。

②主句是People巧uate&，because引导原因状语从句。一

③ because引导的原因状语从句由and连接的两个知为分句 their food is gathered for the winter whe agricultural work is over 构成。

[句意]，冬吟粮贪收集—来了，农活结束了，人们都心怀感激。

[仿写]孩子们睡觉去了，家务被完了，苏珊感到轻松自在。

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在学校，你一定有一个最喜欢的场所，如教室、图书馆、操场等。请你根据以下提示，以“My favorite place at school”为题，写一篇英语短文，向某英文杂志投稿。

提示：1. 你最喜欢的一个场所;

2. 你喜欢它的原因。

要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。标题不计入总词数。

My favorite place at school

2. Sophia cannot f herself for not seeing her mother before she died.

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