Question

【题目】假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。
写作要点：1）做家务的理由；. 2）做家务的过程；3）你的感受。
注意：1）短文词数不少于100；
2）开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3）不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
I am an 18-year-old middle school student,

Answer 1

【答案】 I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help. Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors. At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.
【解析】本篇作文属于提纲式作文，要求学生用英语写一篇日记。内容为周末帮助家人做家务，这是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性、生活性的原则。提纲类书面表达要求学生在写作时条理清晰，将所给的几个要点适当展开，并合理的组成比较通顺的语句。写作中要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，首先要保证句子的正确，然后尽量使用一点高级词汇，适当的时候变换句式结构，使得条理清晰，行文优美。