Question

【题目】高三年级是高中生活的最后一年，这一年中，学生们面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生课间也坐在教室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们：适当的休息很有必要。现在就请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。要点如下：

1．十分钟的课间休息很有必要。

2．要注意适当的休息方式。

3．你是怎样利用这十分钟的。

注意：①开头已经给出，不计入总词数；②词数100左右。

A Ten-minute Break

As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited._______________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

A Ten-minute Break

As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.

During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.

【解析】

试题分析：高三年级是高中生活的最后一年，这一年中，学生们面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生课间也坐在教室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们：适当的休息很有必要。现在就请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. 运用主语从句；Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.恰当运用连词；In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is necessary.用to do形式做主语；Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. 运用并列句；As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. 此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。