题目内容
16.已去,劳动节将至.假设你是李华,请你以"过绿色节日"为主题,并根据下面所给出的要点提示,用英语给高一学生写一封倡议书.要点提示:
1.少放或不放烟花爆竹及其理由;
2.出游、访友尽量不开车及其理由;
3.减少购物和盛宴,过节俭节日;
4.志愿捡垃圾,帮助清洁工人减轻负担.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.参考词汇:烟花爆竹fireworks盛宴feast节俭的economical志愿做volunteer to do清洁工人dustman减轻负担ease burden
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua.Since the Labor Day is approaching,I'm writing tocall on Senior One students in our school to have a"green"festival.
First of all,spectacular though fireworks are,we should stop or limit their use.(高分句型一)Fireworks shows not only produce harmful gases,but also claim many lives every year.(高分句型二)Secondly,in order to save energy and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide,we'd better give up driving cars when going out or visiting our friends.In addition,it is also advisable to minimize our spending on shopping and feasts.Finally,we may volunteer to pick up rubbish in the streets,easing the burden of dustmen so that they have a more relaxing holiday.(高分句型三)
Dear friends,let's work together to make the May Day celebration economical and environmentally friendly..
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假设你是李华,请你以"过绿色节日"为主题,并根据下面所给出的要点提示,用英语给高一学生写一封倡议书,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:少放或不放烟花爆竹及其理由;出游、访友尽量不开车及其理由;减少购物和盛宴,过节俭节日;志愿捡垃圾,帮助清洁工人减轻负担.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:call on呼吁,号召;First of all首先;not only,but also不仅,而且Secondly其次;Finally最后;give up放弃;
First of all,spectacular though fireworks are,we should stop or limit their use.(高分句型一)
Fireworks shows not only produce harmful gases,but also claim many lives every year.(高分句型二)
Finally,we may volunteer to pick up rubbish in the streets,easing the burden of dustmen so that they have a more relaxing holiday.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua.Since the Labor Day is approaching,I'm writing to call on Senior One students in our school to have a"green"festival.
First of all,spectacular though fireworks are,we should stop or limit their use.(高分句型一)Fireworks shows not only produce harmful gases,but also claim many lives every year.(高分句型二)Secondly,in order to save energy and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide,we'd better give up driving cars when going out or visiting our friends.In addition,it is also advisable to minimize our spending on shopping and feasts.Finally,we may volunteer to pick up rubbish in the streets,easing the burden of dustmen so that they have a more relaxing holiday.(高分句型三)
Dear friends,let's work together to make the May Day celebration economical and environmentally friendly.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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