Question

书面表达（25分）
2008年5月12日汶川大地震带来的伤痛让国人永远铭记在心。伤亡人数众多，房屋倒塌，大量的民众无家可归。五年过去了，一个新汶川重新展现在世人的面前。近日某英语报社举办主题为“New Wenchuan, Great Changes”的征文大赛，请你根据所提供图片写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

Answer 1

New Wenchuan, Great Changes
On May 12, 2008 a great earthquake struck Wenchuan where many houses were destroyed and thousands of people lost their lives in a short time. Almost everything was in ruins.
Luckily, all the people from our country gave a helpful hand to the people who were in trouble. Great changes have taken place in Wenchuan in the past three years. The brave people in Wenchuan have done their best to rebuild their own hometown. Lots of buildings have been put up and students go to their new schools to study happily. You’ll find a new beautiful Wenchuan while visiting here!

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，反映汶川的重建问题。写作前对图画进行仔细分析，包括英语提示，了解图画想要表达的主旨，用自己的语言陈述观点和理由，需要注意紧扣文章主题，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文使用了词组：in ruins“成为废墟”，in trouble“有困难”，take place“发生”，do their best to“尽力做…”， put up“建立”，句型也多变：On May 12, 2008 a great earthquake struck Wenchuan where many houses were destroyed and thousands of people lost their lives in a short time. 这句话用了定语从句。Luckily, all the people from our country gave a helpful hand to the people who were in trouble. 这句话也用了定语从句， You’ll find a new beautiful Wenchuan while visiting here!这句话用了状语从句的省略句。