题目内容
20．请修改下面短文． 文中共有10处语言错误．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
3．请按要求将答案填入答题卡．
Dear Tom，
Thank you for write to me．In your e-mail，you asked me how my life was in the senior school．
Well，my life here is really amazed，and it makes me feel excited and a little stressed．Talking of senior English learning，I have learned about some interesting and meaningful topic．From Anne's Diary，I have learned about her family hid away for over two years in order to be caught by the German Nazis during World War II．Beside，I have learned about the development of English．In a fact，the English language has changed quite a lot over the last four centuries．In addition，what impresses me most is the Tangshan earthquake，it almost destroyed the whole city．It were people，including workers，doctors that came to rescue those who were trapping under the ruins．
Well，I will tell you more next time if you are interested．
Yours，
Li Hua．
分析 本文介绍了作者的高中生活．
我的生活兴奋又有一点压力，在英语学习里，我了解到了一些有趣又有意义的话题，从《安妮日记》我知道了她们一家人为了躲避纳粹藏了两年多；我还了解了英语的发展；唐山大地震给我留下深刻的印象．
解答 Thank you for write to me．In your e-mail，you asked me how my life was in the senior school．
Well，my life here is really amazed，and it makes me feel excited and a little stressed．Talking of senior English learning，I have learned about some interesting and meaningful topic．From Anne's Diary，I have learned about her family hid away for over two years in order∧to be caught by the German Nazis during World War II．Beside，I have learned about the development of English．In a fact，the English language has changed quite a lot over the last four centuries．In addition，what impresses me most is the Tangshan earthquake，it almost destroyed the whole city．It were people，including workers，doctors that came to rescue those who were trapping under the ruins．
Well，I will tell you more next time if you are interested．
解析：
1．Write--writing．考查非谓语动词．介词 for 用动名词writing做宾语．
2．Amazed--amazing．考查形容词辨析．做表语，修饰主语 my life here 用 amazing，表示"令人吃惊的"．
3．Topic--topics．考查名词复数．some修饰可数名词的复数topics．
4．about--that或去掉about．考查句式．learn是及物动词，所以连接宾语从句时，要去掉about，或者改为that．
5．order和to之间加not．考查句义一致．本句表示"为了不被纳粹捉住"，所以order和to之间加not．
6．Beside--besides．考查词形相似词．本句表示"此外我也了解了英语的发展"，所以用besides表示"此外"，Beside表示"在…的旁边"．
7．去掉fact前面的a．考查冠词．固定短语In fact 表示"实际上"．
8．it--which．考查定语从句．引导非限制性定语从句，代指先行词the Tangshan earthquake，做从句的主语，用which．
9．were--was．考查强调句式．强调主语people，including workers，doctors，用于一般过去时态，用it was…that．强调句式里不用are，were．
10．trapping--trapped．考查被动语态．谓语动词trap和主语 who 之间是被动关系，所以用过去分词trapped．
点评 考查短文改错．
．强调句的结构是：It+be+强调部分+that （who）+主谓句．强调句的连词只有两个，that和who．当强调的部分是人，且为句子的主语时，才用"who"，其余用that．
原句：My father did the experiment in the lab yesterday evening．
强调主语：It was my father who did the experiment in the lab yesterday evening．
强调宾语：It was the experiment that my father did in the lab yesterday evening．
强调时间：It was yesterday evening that my father did the experiment in the lab．（注意不用when）
强调地点：It was in the lab that my father did the experiment yesterday evening．
The family is the center of most traditional Asians'lives．Many people worry about their families'welfare，reputation，and honor．Asian families are often extended，including several generations related by blood or marriage living in the same home．An Asian person's misdeeds are not blamed just on the individual but also on the family-including the dead ancestors．
Traditional Chinese，among many other Asians，respect their elders and feel a deep sense of duty toward them．Children repay their parents'sacrifices by being successful and supporting them in old age．This is accepted as a natural part of life in China．In contrast，taking care of aged parents is often viewed as tremendous burden in the United States，where aging and family support are not honored highly．
The Vietnamese family consists of people currently alive as well as the spirits of the dead and of the as-yet unborn．Any decisions or actions are done from family considerations，not individual desires．People's behavior is judged on whether it brings shame or pride to the family．Vietnamese children are trained to rely on their families，to honor elderly people，and to fear foreigners．Many Vietnamese think that their actions in this life will influence their status in the next life．
Fathers in traditional Japanese families are typically strict and distant．Japanese college students in one study said they would tell their fathers just about as much as they would tell a total stranger．The emotional and communication barrier between children and fathers in Japan appears very strong after children have reached a certain age．
Although there has been much talk about"family values"in the United States，the family is not a usual frame of reference for decisions in U．S．mainstream culture．Family connections are not so important to most people．Dropping the names of wealthy or famous people the family knows is done in the United States，but it is not viewed positively．More important is a person's own individual"track record"of personal achievement．
Thus，many cultural differences exist in family structures and values．In some cultures，the family is the center of life and the main frame of reference for decisions．In other cultures，the individuals，not the family，is primary．In some cultures，the family's reputation and honor depend on each person's actions； in other cultures，individuals can act without permanently affecting the family life．Some cultures value old people，while other cultures look down on them．
（Adapted from R．L．Oxford R．C．Scarcella，"A Few Family Structures and Values Around the Globe"）
| Outline | Supporting details |
| （71）Introduction to family structure | Family structure is of great （72）importance/significance in different cultures． Children raised in a family will gradually learn how to （73）behave in a way which is acceptable in their culture or setting． 'Many cultural differences （74）arise/result/come/originate from family structures． |
| Examples of Asian families | Traditional Asians （75）center/centre their lives around family．Not only the individual but the family is to （76）blame for any wrongdoings． In China，parents'sacrifices will probably （77）payoff when children grow up．Children will also provide for the elders． In Vietnam，it's not from the personal desires but from family considerations that decisions or actions are done． In Japan，children are （78）unwilling/reluctant/afraid to share their emotions with father，thus making communication difficult． |
| Examples of families in the USA | Americans don't lay much emphasis on family values．（79）Instead/Howeverpersonal achievement is considered more important． |
| Conclusion | Family structures and values （80）vary/differ in different cultures． |