Question

6．请根据下列两幅图写一篇短文，短文内容应包括以下几个要点：
①妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩；
②儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理．
③写作时要适当地发挥，语言连贯，要写出妈妈的惊诧，还要写自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点．
④词数：120左右． 注意：开头第一句已经在答卷中写好，不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文．
写作要点为：①妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩；
②儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理．

解答 As can be seen from the cartoons，it is a story about a bad example of family education．In the first picture，a boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground while his Mom persuaded him not to do so，saying"Don't do that，otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known"．In the second picture，the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet．Mom was greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy："If I had lifted the oil bottle，you would think that it was me who brought it down．"
I disagree with what the mother did in the story．As we all know，parents are the first teachers．I think parents should not only care for their children's health，but their minds．They should let their children know it's a pleasure to help others who are in trouble．

点评 考生需仔细观察图画内容，理解图画的内涵．考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．