题目内容
12.某个省份高考状元的笔记本被冠以"状元笔记"在网上高价出售,你班对该现象进行了辩论.请你根据以下辩论结果写一篇100词左右英语短文.要点如下:| 赞同及理由 | 1."状元笔记"具有参考价值,便于购买者取长补短,提高学习成绩; 2.利于环保. |
| 反对及理由 | 1.他人的学习笔记未必适合自己; 2.自己做笔记记得更牢. |
| 你的观点 |
2.参考词汇:(1)辩论debate v.; (2)环境保护的 environmentally friendly adj.
(3)状元笔记 the notebooks of top students in the Gaokao
(4)高价at a high price online.
The notebooks of top students in the Gaokao are sold out at a high price online.Our class had a debate on it.Students hold different views.
Some students are in favor of buying them online.They think top students'notebooks are worth reading and can save them much time.(高分句型一)Besides,they can make full use of the notes to improve their learning.(高分句型二)In addition,reusing notebooks is also environmentally friendly.However,others don't agree.They think top students'notebooks are not necessarily suitable for everybody else.What's more,students can remember what teachers explain in class better if they take notes themselves.(高分句型三)
Personally,I insisted on taking notes myself and not buying others..
分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息个省份高考状元的笔记本被冠以"状元笔记"在网上高价出售,你班对该现象进行了辩论.请你根据以下辩论结果写一篇100词左右英语短文,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:赞同及理由和反对及理由及自己观点2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:at a high price 以很高的价格;in favor of 支持;Besides另外;make full use of 充分利用;In addition另外;However然而;What's more而且;insist on坚持
They think top students'notebooks are worth reading and can save them much time.(高分句型一)
Besides,they can make full use of the notes to improve their learning.(高分句型二)
What's more,students can remember what teachers explain in class better if they take notes themselves.(高分句型三)
解答 The notebooks of top students in the Gaokao are sold out at a high price online.Our class had a debate on it.Students hold different views.
Some students are in favor of buying them online.They think top students'notebooks are worth reading and can save them much time.(高分句型一)Besides,they can make full use of the notes to improve their learning.(高分句型二)In addition,reusing notebooks is also environmentally friendly.However,others don't agree.They think top students'notebooks are not necessarily suitable for everybody else.What's more,students can remember what teachers explain in class better if they take notes themselves.(高分句型三)
Personally,I insisted on taking notes myself and not buying others.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
| A. | because | B. | because of | C. | as | D. | since |
I'm known for my determination.If I want something,I (36)Afor it; I refuse to give up until I succeed.Over the years this attitude has worked well for me and helped me achieve my goals.(37)B,when I wanted to be on the dance team at school,I learned all the dances and practiced until I could hardly (38)DAnd when I wanted money for a new computer,I washed cars,babysat,and walked dogs for all my neighbors.
(39)Cthis year everything changed.I had set my sights on a summer
(40)C that I was determined to get at the Water Zone,because the employees there could go on the water rides after their work and get free food at the snack bar.It was the (41)A job to have on hot summer vacations.So just as I had achieved every goal in the past,I set out to (42)Athe job.I completed the application in my neatest handwriting,carefully prepared for my interview,and gathered a pack of recommendation letters.I was certain that nothing (43)D keep me from my dream job.
But after my (44)B,the manager of the Water Zone told me that he could hire only those with experience in water safety.I was (45)DI felt like a failure.
On the last weekend before school ended,my teacher,Mrs.Keller,asked me
(46)B I would be interested in the kids'summer day camp.I decided that I had nothing to(47)C,so I called the manager and (48)A an interview.She was(49)Bby my babysitting experience and employed me.In less than a week,I had completely (50)Cabout wanting to work at the water park.Each time I comforted a little boy who missed his mother or a little girl who needed to help tying her shoes,I felt I was doing something (51)DI realized that I had discovered my life's (52)D:to work with children.I now have a new goal.I'm going to study to become an elementary school teacher.
Sometimes in life we don't get (53)Bwhat we want.Our dream guy or girl may not be interested in us.The coach may not select us for the team.A certain employer may not choose to hire us.It's natural to feel (54)C; I sure did.But I also learned an important lesson.Occasionally,when we don't get what we want,something even (55)Ais waiting for us around the corner!
| 36.A.go | B.apply | C.cheer | D.wait |
| 37.A.In addition | B.For example | C.Before long | D.As a result |
| 38.A.smile | B.speak | C.think | D.move |
| 39.A.Otherwise | B.So | C.But | D.Therefore |
| 40.A.day | B.course | C.job | D.camp |
| 41.A.perfect | B.tough | C.regular | D.potential |
| 42.A.land | B.quit | C.change | D.keep |
| 43.A.should | B.must | C.need | D.could |
| 44.A.practice | B.interview | C.expectation | D.experiment |
| 45.A.promoted | B.punished | C.selected | D.refused |
| 46.A.how | B.whether | C.what | D.why |
| 47.A.save | B.learn | C.lose | D.regret |
| 48.A.scheduled | B.cancelled | C.mentioned | D.gave |
| 49.A.inspired | B.impressed | C.touched | D.puzzled |
| 50.A.doubted | B.complained | C.forgotten | D.known |
| 51.A.challenging | B.reasonable | C.traditional | D.significant |
| 52.A.track | B.motto | C.belief | D.purpose |
| 53.A.only | B.exactly | C.properly | D.immediately |
| 54.A.curious | B.nervous | C.disappointed | D.interested |
| 55.A.better | B.easier | C.higher | D.crazier |
Identify at least two different roles.You do not have to be qualified for these positions today,nor do they have to exist in your company.However,these roles should be related to your current skill set.They are career options that look interesting.Once you have a couple of targets,think about why and what interests you.Pay close attention to what appeals to you,and write it down.This will give insight into your motivations and targets.
Subscribe to a career specific magazine.Knowledge is power in the workplace.All busi-nesses must stay relevant to their customers in order to win the competitions and increase revenue(收益).Reading about industry trends,advancements and success stories keeps you in touch with market conditions.This information allows you to see which companies and professionals are leading the peck.You can follow their examples in your own workplace.If you associate with those that stand out from the rest,you are likely to find yourself with better opportunities.
Do exceptional work.In any role,there is a way to perform at your best.Look for ways to deliver a top performance.Show up early,be flexible to new assignments,have a positive attitude,cooperate with other departments,pay attention to the little details.
Be professionally curious.Talk to people about their careers.Learn more about how success is measured in other roles,departments and companies.Ask people their thoughts on different industries.Challenge yourself to expand your business knowledge through interactions with people at regular time.People hire people.You never know what connections may be relevant when you start your next job search,so develop a habit of making good connections no matter where you go.Take the time to learn about others,and be helpful when you can.
As in all things in life,getting in front of a difficult task early is always less stressful than reacting to a career surprise.Changing jobs is to be expected.No matter how secure you feel today,the time will come when either you or your employer decide it is time to change.
| How to Improve Your Carter Prospects | ||
| Passage outline | Supporting details | |
| Problem | ?Job searching under pressure (71)causes negative consequences,such as nervous interviewing. | |
| Ways to improve your career prospects | Identify at least two different roles | ?The roles are supposed to have (72)something/muchto do with your current skill set. ?Pay close attention to those things that make you(73)interested. |
| Subscribe to a magazine on carter | ?The relevant knowledge in the workplace can make you (74)competitive/powerful/successful in the business world. ?Follow the examples in your field, making it (75)possible/probably/likely for you too get better chances. | |
| Do exceptional work | ?Try your best to perform at your best. ?Work early to finish new tasks with a flexible and positive attitude. ?Cooperate with other departments Without(76)inoring/overlooking/overlookinglittle details. | |
| Be professionally curious | ?Talk about people's careers and learn how people (77)measuresuccess in other role and fields. ?Widen your business knowledge by interacting with people (78)regularly/often/frequently. ?Develop a Habit of connecting well wherever you go. | |
| Conclusion | Facing hard tasks early can help reduce your (79)stress/pressure. ?Changing jobs may be (80)unavoidable,however secure you feel today. | |