题目内容
【题目】虽然人们不停的说给孩子减负 ,但是大部分学生的学习压力仍然很大, 有些青少年尤其是高三的学生出现了心理问题, 焦虑,不愿意与人交往等。就这种现象,你们班要举行一次班会,作为班长,写一篇发言稿。内容包括:
1. 健康的心理很重要。
2.. 给同学提些建议:如了解自己, 树立信心;与人相处;热爱生活
注意:1. 字数不少于 100 字 。
2. 适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear classmates,
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【答案】Dear classmates,
Mental health is something that decides whether we can live a happy life or not. However, mental health is easy to be overlooked, which can result in serious mental diseases. Here is some advice on keeping mental health.
First, know your own potential and accept yourself. Instead of having impractical and high expectations and demands for yourself, you should make practical goals for your life.
Second, be sociable and make as many friends as possible. Try to be a person easy to get along with. When you are discouraged, you can share your trouble with your friends, whose comfort and help can greatly relieve your sufferings and help you out.
Third, love your life and work. Try to display your talent in your work and you can get pleasure and satisfaction from your achievements, which can help you keep a good mood.
That is my idea. Thank you for listening.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,针对学生由于压力过大而出现心理问题这一现象提出一些建议。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
要求:1.健康的心理很重要。
2. 给同学提些建议:如了解自己,树立信心;与人相处;热爱生活
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
live a happy life or not; mental health; be easy to do; overlook; result in; disease; some advice on doing; potential; Instead of doing; impractical; expectation; make practical goals for; sociable; as many as possible; get along with; discourage; share...with...; relieve sufferings; display; pleasure; achievement; keep a good mood .
第三步:连词成句
Mental health is something that decides whether we can live a happy life or not.
However, mental health is easy to be overlooked, which can result in serious mental diseases.
First, know your own potential and accept yourself.
Instead of having impractical and high expectations and demands for yourself, you should make practical goals for your life.
Second, be sociable and make as many friends as possible.
When you are discouraged, you can share your trouble with your friends, whose comfort and help can greatly relieve your sufferings and help you out.
Try to display your talent in your work and you can get pleasure and satisfaction from your achievements, which can help you keep a good mood.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改