Question

你身边的不少同学喜欢用手机发短信、听音乐。有的同学喜欢周末上网玩游戏，影响了正常的学习。针对这个现象，你决定给校广播站写一篇稿件，倡议同学们要正确对待现代媒体。内容包括：
1.列举沉迷于现代媒体的现象；
2.提出合理化的建议。
注意：词数100字左右。
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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

Dear fellow students,
With the popularity of cell phones and the Internet, some of us students spend too much time playing with cell phones or computer games, which has negative effects on our studies.Worse still, we have little time to communicate with our parents and friends. Nor do we have time for physical exercises.
What shall we do to improve the situation? All of us should be fully aware of the harmful effects of modern media. Let’s limit our time of playing with cell phones or computer games. Instead we should spend more time playing sports or talking with our friends, which helps to relax and communicate with each other.
Let’s stay away from modern media. Let’s take action now!
That’s all. Thank you!

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达。要求给校广播站写一篇稿件，倡议同学们要正确对待现代媒体。内容包括： 1.列举沉迷于现代媒体的现象；2.提出合理化的建议。这只是一个提纲，没有具体的内容，难度上增加了，要求在提纲的基础上进行拓展，丰富文章内容，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】范文围绕两个要点展开，句式长短句结合，句式多变：With the popularity of cell phones and the Internet, some of us students spend too much time playing with cell phones or computer games, which has negative effects on our studies. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句， Nor do we have time for physical exercises.这句话用了倒装句， Instead we should spend more time playing sports or talking with our friends, which helps to relax and communicate with each other.这句话也使用了非限制性定语从句。而且使用了一些短语：be fully aware of 充分意识到，stay away from 远离，take action采取行动，Worse still更糟糕的是。