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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I'll never forget the story which happen on a bus the other day．It was a wind day．I got on the bus after school．A young lady was standing next to me．In a flash，a strong wind blew through the window．A lady's false hair was blown away．To our surprises，she was hairless．While she was wondering what to do it，many passengers laughed loudly．So she managed to hold back her tears．Saw this，I picked up her false hair and said，"Don't sad，Miss．I'm sure your hair will grow soon．"When I glanced to other passengers，they all quick nodded their heads with shame．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中讲述了在公交车上看到的一幕．一位年轻女士坐在作者旁边，一阵大风吹进车窗把那位女女士的假发吹掉了，很多乘客都大笑起来，这位女士强忍住泪水，看到这作者帮她捡起假发，说"我确信你的头发很快就会长出来的"，其他乘客听了都羞愧地低下了头．

解答 I'll never forget the story which happen on a bus the other day．It was a wind day．I got on the bus after school．A young lady was standing next to me．In a flash，a strong wind blew through the window．A lady's false hair was blown away．To our surprises，she was hairless．While she was wondering what to do it，many passengers laughed loudly．So she managed to hold back her tears．Saw this，I picked up her false hair and said，"Don't∧sad，Miss．I'm sure your hair will grow soon．"When I glanced to other passengers，they all quick nodded their heads with shame．
详解：
1．happen改为happened；考查动词的时态，本文讲的是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时．
2．wind改为windy；考查形容词，此处用形容词作定语修饰名词day．
3．the改为a；考查冠词，此处用不定冠词a泛指"一辆公共汽车"．
4．window改为Windows；考查名词的单复数，window是可数名词，结合句意"一阵大风吹进车窗"不可能是一个窗户，故用复数形式．
5．A改为The；考查冠词，此处指的是上文提到的A young lady，故用定冠词the表示特指．
6．surprises改为surprise考查名词，to one's surprise为固定结构，意为"使某人吃惊的是"．
7．去掉it；考查名词性从句，what to do 是一个宾语从句，疑问代词what在从句中作动词do的宾语，it多余，故去掉．
8．Saw改为Seeing；考查非谓语动词，主语I与动词see存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词短语Seeing this作状语．
9．sad前面加be；考查系表结构，此处在助动词don't后面加上系动词be，与后面的形容词sad构成系表结构．
10．quick改为quickly；考查副词，此处用副词作状语，修饰动词nodded．

点评 短文改错题首先要整体理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，结合语境和上下文关系，充分运用平时掌握的固定搭配，习惯用法，句型结构等等来发现文章的错误之处，加以修正．