Question

Dear Mrs Winthorp,

So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.

I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.

Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this aftemoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.

Best,

Carol

 

Answer 1

【答案】what----how；句意如何让对方知道情况的进展，故改为how。

【答案】.anything----everything ；anything常用于否定疑问句中，不合适。

【答案】find----found ；现在和过去的对比，时态应为一般过去时。

【答案】second前加the ；序数词second前的定冠词使用。

【答案】friend---friends； make a friend=make friends。

【答案】on----with； help sth,with sth.

【答案】warmly----warm ；由此处为形容词作表语。

【答案】去掉to，；had better do sth.固定用法。

【答案】mine----my ；形容词性的物主代词。

【答案】for----so ；因此，所以，应该是so, for表补充说明原因.。